[Fan Art] BethMcBeth's Big O Fan Art *Dorothy with Blue Roses* UPDATE!

Alrighty this is just a sketch but I really need some feedback or what not just rant! ^_^"

Sexxy Dorothy!

-Beth

Er, well...that is....

Is there any way for me to input without sounding like a pervert?

Now that's what I call Dorothy Fanar!!! WooHoo!!!

Now, if only I can get her to ....

** gets slammed by Beth's boot **

Never mind!

Great stuff, Beth. I really think this sketch has a lot of potential.

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Originally posted by Lyinginbedmon Er, well...that is.... Is there any way for me to input without sounding like a pervert?

No, but why let that stop you?

Beth, I think of Dorothy as having smaller, firmer breasts. (I can't resist using the word "perky.") They should be higher when her arms are stretched above her head like that.

I love the way those panties look on her. Woo-hoo!

The perspective is a little off; her right breast and arm look larger than the left.

Would it be hotter if she were looking directly at the viewer, or is it hotter the way it is, with her looking at someone else, making it so the viewer is an intruder on someone else's scene? I can't decide!

To sum up .. more! MORE! MORE!

Well, he said it not me, so now I can say 'I agree' without sounding nearly as perverted, so

I agree

Alrighty here she is all dressed up!

Sexxy Dorothy Complete and in Color

-Beth

Let's see...

"Your skill with copic markers knows no age limit"?

Mmmmmeeeeeeeeeooooooooowwwwwwwwww!!!

Doesn't she look great! I mean, what I wouldn't do to get a piece of...

** Slapped by Beth **

Never mind!

With all kidding aside, this is a very cute pose for Dorothy.

Good work, Beth. I really think this is one of your better pieces.

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Originally posted by BethMcBeth Alrighty here she is all dressed up! Sexxy Dorothy Complete and in Color -Beth

All dressed up?

I love the subtle shading. And the whole idea of Dorothy using lacy pink lingerie is a welcome surprise. Rowrrr! And I ESPECIALLY like the way her bra cups seem to be falling off. It adds intriguing motion to what would otherwise be a static pose.

Here is my holiday treat to all!! ^_^"" I even took the Holly Plant picture with my camera that became the background too!! ^_^"""
Here's the Link too

-Beth



If you have a fanart request please contact me at: BethMcBeth@hotmail.com

Now I know Roger is thinking something, but what could sweet, innocent, Dorothy be thinking?

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Originally posted by BethMcBeth Here is my holiday treat to all!! ^_^"" I even took the Holly Plant picture with my camera that became the background too!! ^_^""" Here's the Link too -Beth

Yeah, I can see Dorothy pulling the reins in that relationship. Go Dominatrix Dorothy!

That's a sweet picture, and so true to life. However, I have to disagree on the background: rather than holly, that looks like kinnikinnick. The latter is relished by deer, so I'd say Roger has his dinner ready for him. What a role-player!

Pygmalion

Alrighty another sketch! Need some help with it though thanks!

Negotiations Concluded Sketch

-Beth

P.S. Lyinginbedmon you always read my mind!

Woo-hoo! You're really on a roll, Beth!

The visible hand is awkward-looking. though a lot of that is the line extending the pinky down to the bottom of the palm, which looks weird. Angel's hands are very slender.

The face seems flat compared to the VERY CURVY rest of the composition, and the neck seems off-center, not in line with her cleavage.

Heeyyy, wait a minute, that's Roger's tie draped across her legs, isn't it?

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Originally posted by A Clockwork Tomato Woo-hoo! You're really on a roll, Beth! The visible hand is awkward-looking. though a lot of that is the line extending the pinky down to the bottom of the palm, which looks weird. Angel's hands are very slender. The face seems flat compared to the VERY CURVY rest of the composition, and the neck seems off-center, not in line with her cleavage. Heeyyy, wait a minute, that's Roger's tie draped across her legs, isn't it?

looking back at it, i have to agree now about what ACT says about the face, but truthfully i didn't notice it before. and i still like how it is. i think the neck is lined up fine. and, golly gee, SHE'S GOT NO TOES! bah that doesn't matter

Thank you all so much for your comments again! I have taken all of them and more into considertation and have retouched her up again.

The new sketch can be found here: Negotitations Concluded Sketch II

If theres anything more I would really appercaite it! ^_^"


-Beth

The only problem I can see with it is that the chin seems a little too pointed, even for Angel. Otherwise, wonderful! Can't wait to see the colour!

Negotiations conluded Good stuff, Beth. I saw the second first and then I went back to the first one and the second one's better in my book (although I like them both).

I can't really say anything bad about it, although I think Angel's left hand should visible as well, maybe wrapped around her waist. But still, great pic!

P.S.: I like how Roger seemed to have "left" his tie on Angel's legs.
Peace.

So far, I really love it. I think it looks good. Kudos to you.

As for the chin, I did some research. After reviewing stills from Episode 3: Electric City, I found that Angel's chin varies dramatically. Some are smooth:



While, some are really sharp:





And in between:



So, I think the chin you provided was within the "Angel" range. Then again, that's just my opinion.