[Fan Fiction] Act 41: "ALAN'S THEFT." Season 4 by A.C.T. (PG-13)

A Clockwork Tomato 07-15-2004 01:19 PM
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Originally posted by Tony

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“We’ll get more people. Tony will be glad to help.”


Well, thank goodness that I am not him. Poor dude, the person he has a crush on wants him to save a guy who she has a thing for. That's rough!

Overall, I think this Act rocks! Kudos, Uncle Tomato! Very well done!!! Smile


Well, thank you very much.

Yes, I discovered that there's nothing like "nice girls with inappropriate boyfriends" to make other guys gnash their teeth.

I think next episode will have a change of pace, though. There hasn't been anywhere near enough property damage so far.
NotAsleep 08-27-2004 11:26 PM
Another solid chapter, Mr. Tomato, and I apologize for not saying so when I first read it. I liked seeing R. Alan get at least a small down payment on his poetically just fate. Will you be continuing the story from here? I'm definitely looking forward to more.