| Son_of_Horus | 06-09-2004 11:12 AM |
[Fan Fiction] Renaissance
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| Originally posted by Son_of_Horus Renaissance ActII I'm trying to keep this PG-13 and out of the R content as much as possible, but as ActIII continues it drifts into that area, so I'm not really sure what I can post here and what I can't. Maybe I can give Pen a private link or something so she can approve it first, and if not then I'll have a private link somewhere for the grown-ups. Sorry if that sounds patronizing, but thats the way it's going to have to be. Renaissance has some violently disturbing visuals as well as some implied sexual situations which just wouldn't be appropriate to post here. |
Drat you! I find myself impatiently thinking "Shut up and KISS her, Roger!"
Good work in keeping the tension going. I look forward to the next section.
Dude, it most seriously rocks! Great job.
Kudos.
Kudos.
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| Originally posted by Son_of_Horus I'm trying to keep this PG-13 and out of the R content as much as possible, but as ActIII continues it drifts into that area, so I'm not really sure what I can post here and what I can't. Maybe I can give Pen a private link or something so she can approve it first, and if not then I'll have a private link somewhere for the grown-ups. Sorry if that sounds patronizing, but thats the way it's going to have to be. Renaissance has some violently disturbing visuals as well as some implied sexual situations which just wouldn't be appropriate to post here. |
Whoops, missed this quote the first time...
Anyway, that sounds like a good idea. PM me a link and I can check it over if you need me too and I can give you a few options. I know that for sure, you're going to need to have a warning about the content. (That will save you for sure
)Keep up the good work though, I'm enjoying this very well, and I like the format you're writing in.
Later,
Pen1300
I finally got time to sit down and take in Act II, and.. I don't know what to say. You've got the characters down perfectly, you describe scenery minimally, yet I'm able to get vivid mental images of what's going on, and the dialogue is snappy and flows very well.
I'm really curious as to how Beck is going to play into all of this later on. His scene was hilarious. The whole story is excellent, really. I'm eagerly awaiting the continuation.
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I'm really curious as to how Beck is going to play into all of this later on. His scene was hilarious. The whole story is excellent, really. I'm eagerly awaiting the continuation.
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