[Other] The Big-Oh! RP — An Archive of Plans and Discussions

evanASF27 09-22-2004 09:48 PM
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Originally posted by Big Finale
That still doesn't explain how Dastun knew it existed.

It's not like this RP is taking place after Hydra...

(sorry I'm replying so late)

...it's not after Hydra?! O_O ...where is this in the timeline (roughly) then?? Confused

(Of course I dunno how long Dastun's had the files about the Union...he could have had it before Hyrda but we never saw it till then)

....also...come on! @_@ Out of character!? Okay...maybe a little...but you never know. He's a military cop...MILTARY. They can do those sorts of things. Well...whatever if you guys want I can refigure the post and make it so that he does something else (what I don't know o.o)
stryker 09-22-2004 09:50 PM
Yeah, maybe if you could give us sort of a pinpoint timeline wise in the anime.
Tifaria 09-22-2004 10:01 PM
From what I understood, this whole thing was set before "Stripes", but.. I don't know for sure.
The Big Finale 09-22-2004 10:41 PM
To (sort of) repeat myself for a third time, the Big-Oh RPG is alternate events just before and after Stripes (hence the fact that I introduced Vera as having just came to Paradigm).
stryker 09-23-2004 02:32 AM
Sorry about that Big F. I guess I should have read the background more carefully.

I posed a most excellent scene that Tifaria sent me to collaborate with, which I simply added a little bit to. I'm afraid I fell asleep looking at it. I need to just go to bed when the clock tells me to. Big Grin
Tifaria 09-23-2004 03:22 PM
Stryker, that was brilliant! The parts you added really help it flow a lot better (especially some of Roger's dialogue-- I have such trouble writing words for him that don't sound like something he'd never say), and I especially love the part with Beck. Big Grin Your way with words astounds me again.
evanASF27 09-23-2004 03:27 PM
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Originally posted by Big Finale
To (sort of) repeat myself for a third time, the Big-Oh RPG is alternate events just before and after Stripes (hence the fact that I introduced Vera as having just came to Paradigm).

hmm...I see. Do you guys want me to change dastun's last move?
stryker 09-24-2004 12:42 AM
Uhh... I really think it would be a good idea. You want to yack about alternatives here or in PM? I could work with you on it. I think those Union spies might be a part of a larger plan that might be important, or it might be that Big F would prefer that you solve it in a less "Lupin" manner. Wink Sorry, couldn't resist.

Oh, and the rest of us are going to be doing some wound licking and soul searching for a while, so, by all means, let's see some Seebach and Norman! Alex and Amilia! Big Grin

Oh, and thank you very much Tif, you're too generous with your praise, especially when you did all the work.
The Big Finale 09-24-2004 09:45 AM
I would prefer it to be done in a less... "Lupin".... manner, to use stryker's term.

EDIT: And slower, to fit with the flow better. Much slower. Doesn't mean that Dastun has to spend all his time at the MP HQ though (even though he seems to already...)

Actually, I just got a really strange idea that would completely mess with everything everyone has ever been told about the Big O: Namely, that all the people Roger helped throughout the series (Oliver, Instro, Bonnie Fraser, etc.) were all connected to the Union someway. THAT would turn everything on it's ear, but it'd throw things way too far out of whack... maybe I can try that as a short story.

Okay, so skip that. Funny, I didn't notice any spot in Tifaria's post that didn't look like one of hers (beside the fact that you posted it...) What did you add? (maybe I'm just blind.)
Tifaria 09-24-2004 10:08 AM
Stryker edited what I'd already written of Roger's dialogue and added some more, as well as Roger's internal thoughts-- really, that was for the best, as I'm terrible at writing Roger, whether he's speaking or thinking. He also added the scene with Beck, and some snippets of dialogue for Emilia and Snake.

Big F, that sounds like.. a neat idea. It'd cause quite a bit of chaos, though, but then, this thing is all about chaos. Big Grin

I also vote for a little slowing down of Dastun's actions. I like where you're going with it, Evan, but give it some time to develop, so you can build up some nice old fashioned anxiety/anticipation. Smile )
evanASF27 09-24-2004 11:34 AM
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Originally posted by Big Finale
I would prefer it to be done in a less... "Lupin".... manner, to use stryker's term.

EDIT: And slower, to fit with the flow better. Much slower. Doesn't mean that Dastun has to spend all his time at the MP HQ though (even though he seems to already...)

....uhh....for one it's not very Lupinish at all Oh Well If anything it's like the three stooges. (Getting a man to run past, while two of them hit the guy over the head with [insert object])

The thing is, Dastun is always the last character in any fanfic, RPG, and even the show that you'd think would have an "important" role. I thought I could change that by making him slightly different than the way he is 99% of the time portrayed. Spending all his time at the Military Police HQ would do nothing for him...

Stryker, let's talk about this on AIM later today (if you can).
(This is what I get for getting here late in the game...both figuratively and literally.)

*EDIT*
Tifaria...build what anxiety? We've got anxiety and suspense left right up and down here, with Seebach and Norman, Vera and Snake, Alan and Angel...with all due respect, where the heck would Dastun fit in with it? Any suggestions would really be appreciated. I don't see really any other way for him to get "involved" in the plot. I was thinking of getting dastun to interact with Seebach, for something interesting to say the least...but FP already took dibs with his Norman+Seebach thing (whatever the hell it is). Dastun can't really do anything with Roger now because 1) the fight's over, 2) the main focus is on Snake, Alan, and Vera now, and 3) Dastun STILL has to do something with the Union spies in the Military Police...I mean he CAN'T just let that go.
stryker 09-24-2004 12:21 PM
I think it's just that Tifaria and I harmonize so well. Wink

Evan, I'll be on AIM pretty much all day except for a supper run. I'm home from work early today. AUGH, which I really need, I'm exhausted!

Oh, and there is a disadvantage to playing certain people, in that you might just have to twiddle your thumbs and think about things or just enjoy the RP for a while. I even sat on my hands watching the plot build for a few days in that confrontation, since I didn't want to interrupt. And by staying out, the tension that created between Angel, Beck, Alan and Vera was extreme! It was hard not to roar in and rescue Angel earlier, but it was worth it as the RP benefitted a lot from staying out for a while.
* * * * * * *

And there's another long entry, once again a collaboration with Tifaria. Tif, tell me of any edits you'd like to make.
Tifaria 09-24-2004 03:40 PM
Er, well, Evan.. I have no idea what I meant. At 8 am this morning, it made perfect sense, but forget it. I don't even know what's going on with my own characters, much less anyone else's. Big Grin

Stryker, I really don't think there are any edits necessary! I absolutely love everything you wrote (as usual), especially Roger's struggle with what he feels for Angel, and the parts you wrote for Angel are probably either exactly what I would've thought of, or better. Wink Oh man, it's going to be hard when Roger has to break poor Angel's heart. Frown


Why yes, I am a closet Angel/Roger fan, if you couldn't tell already. Shh, don't tell mom! And please don't lynch me. Much.
stryker 09-24-2004 03:51 PM
*awws and hugs* Hey, we can work that out so it's a soft landing, I feel for the girl too, of course. :/

But thanks again. Just keep in mind that I'm following your lead on this, so share in the glory, girl. Wink

Oh! And... YOU GUYS? Big Finale? pen1300? Fallen Phoenix? Hop in any ol' time, you all! Big Grin
evanASF27 09-24-2004 04:12 PM
Well good news for y'all...I deleted my post (well, the stuff in it) from the RPG thread and I'm gonna make up something new. (which will involve Dastun and Roger...thanks to stryker fer the idea)

It's gonna take a while to write up, not cos it's long but cos it's a complicated series of steps...I don't think you guys will mind it.
stryker 09-24-2004 04:45 PM
Wait I changed my mind! Big Grin Just kidding, I'm such a stinker.

Actually I'm just a catalyst, he has some great ideas.
The Big Finale 09-24-2004 09:59 PM
Heh... well, I'm really in a bind, as it would be inappropriate to make a Vera post right after that "dun Dun DUN" scene, and Alex is waiting for Amelia's response.

In other words, don't look at me. The ball is in pen and FP's court.
stryker 09-25-2004 01:31 AM
Well, Phoenix is out till sunday - man, what expectations! So, pen1300?? Could you post saturday??

In the meantime, I'm rereading some of this, and you guys did one heck of an RP! I am so impressed with you all! Pleased
harshfire 09-25-2004 09:23 AM
OMFG! You guys did so good! I'm still missing some and I'm currently reading it, but I'm a little lost.It's what I get for being gone for a week.Sweatdrop Oh well. I'm a little behind, and I'll post soon, as soon as I figure out where you put Julia. Confused So, yeah, but it's all good. Smile Nyaha.

Later Days:
JA
pen1300 09-25-2004 11:21 AM
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Originally posted by stryker
Well, Phoenix is out till sunday - man, what expectations! So, pen1300?? Could you post saturday??

In the meantime, I'm rereading some of this, and you guys did one heck of an RP! I am so impressed with you all! Pleased


Well...it depends on who you want to hear from on Saturday. (JA, thank you! I now have something for my post with Dorothy. Big Grin ) So, I can do Dorothy today if you guys are interested (just was waiting for FP because of the order of events the posts will go...).

I was going to do Amelia, but as I typed up her post, I remembered I have a post I typed up a while ago (I think) on disk, but that disk is not with me...>.< (I know EXACTLY WHERE IT IS THOUGH!!!Big Grin Big Grin )

So, if you guys can wait until tomorrow evening, I should have a post ready then...

As I was rereading the last few posts in this thread I realized both of my posts will have to come tomorrow (quite possibly-BUMMER). Well, well...I'll just have to make sure I do all of my school work in the down time and keep up with it so I can post! CAN'T WAIT!!!Big Grin Big Grin Big Grin Big Grin

Later,
Pen1300