[Fan Fiction] make up a big o scene!

Xel and Big Finale, I extend a kudos to both of you. Excellent work!

Wow, a nice set of scenes there from everyone, especially Xel and Big Finale!

Yikes!! Xel, you have an incredibly creepy mind. You know that? Ver well written. Poor Beck...

Big Finale: "THe pinky and the brain, the pinky and the brain..." I know have that stuck in my head! Grr!

The truthseeker's burden
a prelude to "Enemy is another Big!"

The man who once was Micheal Seebach sat in a vast, cavernous space. It was cold and dusty, and the open bay doors let in just enough of the wind to stir his wrappings. The sand particles that breeze carried had been gradually insinuating themselves under his bandages, and they itched feircely against his tender, raw skin. If you could call it skin anymore.

The only furnishings here in his place of self-exile were a narrow cot, upon which he threw himself to fitfuly slumber when exhaustion cooled the raging fires of his mind, and a simple folding table and chair set. It was there that he found himself, hunched over a bottle of cheap whiskey, gazing into the stuttering flame of an oil lantern. Across the table from him, His newest and only friend rested silently, just outside the feeble circle of illumination, more of an impression of a shape than a tangible being.

Taking a stiff drink from the bottle, Schwartzward spoke into the gloom.

"Is it really worth it? Is the Truth really worth the price it requires?"

He fell silent for a moment, then with a shuddering sigh he heaved himself out of the flimsy metal seat and began to pace, circling round and round the perimeter of the lamplight.

"I have gained much, it is true! the scales have been torn from my eyes and i have beheld the reality of this world! And yet... and yet, such knowledge has cost me far more dearly than I could have imagined at the start of this quest."

Stopping in his circling, Schwartzwald turned to face his companion.

"If nothing else, I have learned this: the Truth is a God. Far truer a God than that fool Rosewater, regardless of what he tells his lapdogs! The Truth has freed me from my bonds, and given me the ability to do great and terrible things, but in return it constantly demands that I sacrifice to it. My career, my comforts, my identity..."

his shoulders slumped, and his eyes dimmed momentarily. in a whisper so soft as to be nigh inaudible to himself, he continued.

"...My family..."

The wind had died momentarily, and the entire world hung motionless. Schwartzwald stood like a withered tree, swaying ever so slightly. suddenly, he shook his head as if waking up from a confusing dream, and continuesd as if nothing happened.

"Even my own flesh has been offered up to the fires of my devotion to the Truth! No piece or porton of myself has gone untouched by its hunger!"

Whirling to face his audience, he asked his question one last time.

"Is the Truth worth such a price?"

Gazing down inscrutably, Big Duo returned Schwartzwald's stare. No sound was heard, save the moan of the wind, but a presence filled the space between the man and the Megadeus. Some indeterminable time later, Schwartzwald laughed.

"Of course, you are correct!. Better to be mained, than to be blind! better to rule a wastland, than to serve those who do not see! Thank you my friend! but now, to rest, for tomorrow we show Rosewater's lapdogs the true nature of their World!"

With that, He strode to his bed and fell down upon it. within minutes he slept a dreamles sleep.

Big Duo remained seemingly untouched by the entire exchange, a silent sentinel watching over his Dominus...

That was brilliant, Advinius! Great, great, great!

Very good work. Here's hoping to see some more!

Golly, I thought this Paradigm City forum was pretty quiet. Guess not. That's why I haven't posted here in a while.
Why post if there's no one to read your work. I'm still hoping that Big O returns to the airwaves. Then again, maybe not.

Here's another one of my fanfics starring Roger Smith and his friends.
Norman I'm afraid is still dead...according to my storyline anyway.
Before I do, let me setup the story. It's a continuation from my last one where Roger, R.Dorothy and Abigail, another android, escorts our two heroes to my hometown of Binghamton,NY. According to this story, Binghamton has become the Megadeus building capital of the world besides Paradigm City.
Leading up to our next scene, our threesome are in the Binghamton State Office Building checking out the former courtroom. There, they run into-- dum dum dum.........SCHWARTZWALD. (I hope I spelled that right. Oh,well.)

Why is he here in Binghamton for? Hmm? What's his plan? Hmm?
Let's find out as Schwartzwald confronts Roger, R.Dorothy and Abigail--R.Abigail.

"Sooo, if it's my arch-enemy, Roger Smith!" Schwartzwald declared, staring right at the negotiator.

"Schwartzwald, I thought I finished you off." Roger said. He was pretty much surprised that Schwartzwald was back.

"Nope, I'm here alright! You probably want to know why I'm back?"

Roger sighed.

"Why?"

"Because I'm her to acquire a Big so scary and so awesome, that I plan to take over the entire world!"

Abigail was now getting very concerned.

"What are you going to do once you overtake the globe, smart mouth?" Abigail asked.

Schwartzwald was at a loss for words. He actually didn't have an actual plan once he did, if he ever did so. What a scatterbrain dufus. So, he made one up.

"I will destroy all the other Bigs except for my own. Then I will rule the world from here. Then all of the population will be my slaves. HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA!!!" Schwartzwald said.

Roger was laughing on the inside. He then turns to R.Dorothy.

"Oh, please. This guy I don't think has a real plan." he said.

R.Dorothy then turns to Roger.

"He really is a dufus. I really feel very sorry for him." R.Dorothy says.

"ROGER SMITH!!" Schwartwald shouts. "TONIGHT, I BEGIN MY QUEST TO TAKE OVER THIS STUPID WORLD!! HA-HA-HA-HA!!"

Then our threesome feel the building beginning to shake.

"Oh, oh." Dorothy said. "I think we better get out of this tower before it collapses."

"You're right, Dorothy. COME'ON!, LET'S GET OUT OF HERE!!" Roger yelled, then they turn towards the elevator, head for it, enter and the elevator goes down as fast as it could.

About two minutes later, they get out of the elevator. Dorothy picks both of them up and she runs out and away from the office building as fast as a android could run. They got about a full half mile away from the 18-story tower before it collapsed.

However, after the towers' demise, a Big rose from out of the rubble. The Big was of a new design, red and blue color, loaded with missile ports- ouch! The head had three horns on top with two large green glass eyes which glowed when turned on. The arms were made of the usual metal used to build a Big, lined with thick wires. The hands were of human design. But, the fingers themselves were built to cut through the toughest and the thickest of iron, metal and even steel. The body itself had a huge laser eye that could shoot nuclear powered lasers. When it did connect with it's target, the explosion would be huge. Enough to cover a whole large city.

Schwartzwald's new Big he called, the Megiddo or the Big of Armageddon. Oh-oh, that's scary enough big time. He proceeds from the office building's remains and goes north.

"Schwartzwald!" Roger demanded. "What's your motive?!"

"Ha-Ha-Ha-Ha!! I'm going to head for the north pole." Schwartzwald replied as he continued to head north.

"Why there? There's nothing there to seize!!"

"That doesn't matter to me, negotiator! Once there, I will point my guns towards the center of the Earth. After that, the planet should explode. Taking all of you with it!"

"Is he joking, Dorothy?"

"He isn't, Roger Smith. That BIG he has has the laser cannons powerful enough to destroy the world." Dorothy replied.

"Oh. no! God help us!"

NEXT TIME- THE END OF EARTH??

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Originally posted by M.S._Feather And Xel...why must you torture me so?

Cuz you loves it, baby~! *cool pose*

Gosh, everyone's got something to contribute. Xel, nice work as always with your Luger fetish. Big Finale, nice stinger at the end of your piece. Advinius, a great look at Crispy's inner torment. Big Room A, you've really come up with a Doc Smith-sized threat to Roger and his friends; congratulations.

Pygmalion

Thank you.

Dorothy 1 walks calmly down the street and kneels in front of the main bank of Paradigm City. The tentacles in her arms slither out and burst through the doors of the bank and make there way down the elevator shaft to the vaults below...

*scene pauses*

Announcer: Little does Beck know that it will never work.

*scene continues*

Big O rises from the street and pulls Dorothy1 back and throws it into the building behind them...

Announcer: See what I mean? Now then...let's see how things would have worked if the great Lupin the Third was in charge.

*tape rewinds*

*Scene begins*

There is nothing in the streets. People minding their own business. The people in the bank hear sounds of contruction below. A worried customer asked a teller...

Customer: Excuse me, but what is that noise?

Teller: Oh that a crew working on the vaults. We've had leaks in them from rising watertables.

Customer: Oh.........say what's a watertable?

Teller: I don't know. Maybe you should ask one of the workers. Look there's one right by the elevator.

Customer: Okay thank you.

Teller: Have a nice day

The customer walks over to the man who seems to be on break next to the elevator. He looks down the shaft and drops 2 pebbles down it.

Customer: Excuse me?

Workman(Jigen): Uhhh...yes?

Customer: I heard that there was work going on down there. Can you tell me the reason for the repairs?

Workman(Jigen): Umm well you see water's gotten into the bank's safe. We have to patch up the leaks and dry out the money and valubles down there. *a call from the elevator shaft* Uhh hold on just a sec. *calling down the shaft* WHAT IS IT??

Workman(Lupin): *below next to an open vault* IT'S ALL SET! LET'S GO!!

Suddenly a huge megadeus bursts up through the bank with the bank's vault in its hands. The megadeus walks out into the street filled with shocked and screaming people and then it runs away.

*scene pauses*


Announcer: And there you have it folks.

*Beck runs in pushes the announcer out of camera view and shouts into the camera*

Beck: ROLL THE REST OF THE TAPE!!

*scene continues*

Big O rises from the ground and uses its hip anchors to stop the getaway-deus. It then pulls on the chains pulling the megadeus back.

*scene pauses*

Beck: There...

*Lupin kicks Beck out of camera view*

Lupin: KEEP ROLLIN' THE DAMN TAPE!!!!

*scene continues*

Big O pulls the megadeus even closer, but then the megadeus whips out a huge megadeus sized pistol and shoots the chains and breaks free.

*scene pauses*

Lupin: Uh huh ...hehehehe...

*Beck jumps on top of Lupin with his face in the camera's lens*

Beck: ROLL THE REST OF THE TAPE!!!!!

*scene continues*

The megadeus breaks the chains and then begins to run away. Big O follows running after it and it then slams a punch into the back of the megadeus forcing it into the ground. THe piston blasts upwards....

*scene pauses*

Lupin: Why you *picks up beck and tosses him off screen* ROLL THE REST OF THE TAPE!!!!!!!!!

*scene continues*

The megadeus rolls to the side and the piston slams down. The road is destroyed underneath the blast.

*scene pauses*

Beck: What?! WHY YOU...GRRRRRR!!!!!!

Beck and Lupin grapple and wrestle in front of the camera tearing eachother limb from limb...then the floor rumbles. Each of the crooks stops and looks downwards...Big O fist bursts through the room, the camera goes static.

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*PLEASE STAY TUNED* *EXPERIENCING TECHNICAL DIFFICULTIES*

*whacks screen* Dammit, it was just getting good.
Really good scene, Evan! And to the rest of you guys, I'm really enjoying these. ^_^

Nice one, Evan. Beck and Lupin together would be like two brothers fighting

Pygmalion

This is my continuing story where Roger Smith, R.Dorothy and R.Abigail try to stop Schwartzwald from getting to the North Pole and destroying the Earth. In our last part, Roger Smith confronted Schwartzwald inside of the Binghamton State Office Building. However, the goon managed to unearth a new Big called Megiddo or the Armageddon Big. Then he proceeded to the North Pole.

"Ha-Ha-Ha-Ha!! I'm going to head for the north pole." Schwartzwald replied as he continued to head north.

"Why there? There's nothing there to seize!!"

"That doesn't matter to me, negotiator! Once there, I will point my guns towards the center of the Earth. After that, the planet should explode. Taking all of you with it!"

"Is he joking, Dorothy?"

"He isn't, Roger Smith. That BIG he has has the laser cannons powerful enough to destroy the world." Dorothy replied.

"Oh. no! God help us!"

Then Roger Smith got out his cell phone and called Megan, the maid who of course resided at his home in Paradigm City.

"Hello?" Megan said, after answering the phone.

"Megan, this is Roger. Activate Big O and immediately send it to the North Pole." He said.

"Why so, sir."

"There's no time! Send it to the North Pole at once!"

"Sure. Very good, sir."

Roger then turns off his cell phone.

"What now, Roger?" R.Dorothy asked. "How do we get to the North Pole and intercept Schwartzwald?"

"I think I can come up with a solution." said R.Abigail.

"What's that?"

R.Abigail began to float. Her feet opened by the area just above the ankles.

"Grab onto me and hang on very tightly."

Roger and R.Dorothy grabbed R.Abigail and the android shot off into the air like a rocket. Mr.Smith said..

"Whoaaaa!"

"Why do men always say these things?" R.Dorothy said.

"DOROTHY!!, THAT WASN'T FUNNY!!!"

R.Abigail was flying at about 100 mph towards the North Pole. They eventually pass Schwartzwald without notice by the villain himself and cruised through Canada in under 2 hours. Then about another half-hour later, they arrived at the North Pole and Roger's Big O was waiting for them.

"Yes! we're going to beat this freak!!" Roger Smith exclaimed. He was very excited that he got there first.

"Don't celebrate too soon, Roger Smith. He may defeat us in actual battle." R.Dorothy says. Roger sighed.

"Dorothy, we have to remain positive that we can beat, Schwartzwald."

"Sorry, we have to look at all the options."

"True. However, I would like to think that were going to kick Schwartzwald's butt."

If Dorothy knew how to laugh, she could. But, R.Abigail had the capability to laugh. So, she did.

"Why are you laughing, Abigail?" Roger said.

"The way you said, were going to kick his butt. I wonder, how hard are you going to kick it?" Abigail replied, still in a good mood.

Roger laughs hard until' his eyes watered.

"Don't know. But, I'm going to kick it so hard, that Schwartzwald's Big will have his feet pointing straight up."

"That's sounds logical." Dorothy said.

The threesome enter Big O and Mr.Smith gets into the cockpit.

"That's better. Let's see if we can see the Megiddo Big."

Roger flips a few switches and presses a few buttons. Lo and behold coming up from the south was Schwartzwald and his horrible Big--Megiddo, the Armageddon Big.

"Here it comes." Abigail says. "I'd use your laser cannon from the center of your Big. That should destroy his bot."

"As soon as he comes to within' range, Abigail." Roger said.

Meanwhile, Schwartzwald proceeds closer to his target. He finally sees Big O come into view.

"Darn it, Smith!! How did you get Big O up here so fast?!!" Schwartzwald says. He was frustrated and he felt like swearing, but he didn't have time to do so. Then, he sets his awful weapons into position.

"There he goes, Roger! He about to launch his attack on the core of the planet! If he succeeds, the Earth will no longer exist!" Dorothy said in a raised voice.

'Don't I know it. I'm ready for him." he replied, the he got his laser cannon ready by flipping two switches in front of him.

However, Schwartzwald's Megiddo Big had the hands pointed straight down towards the center of the planet.

"I'D LIKE TO SEE YOU TRY STOPPING ME, ROGER SMITH!!!" The mummy-like being shouts.

Just then, R.Dorothy went into her frequency jamming mumbling, keeping the Megiddo Big from shooting his weapons.

"BLAST, ROTTEN GIRL ANDROID!! DO YOU REALIZE WHAT YOU'VE DONE!!?"

"I do, Schwartzwald. You just signed your death warrant. So long, freak!" Roger says, then he presses the firing button which blasted a very fat laser ray towards the Megiddo Big.

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!"

The ray hit the Big, vaporizing it instantly. Schwartzwald was also vaporized into nothingness. The Earth was safe once again. Mr.Smith was so relieved that another threat was taken care of. He proceeded back home to Paradigm City.

At his home, he was sleeping in his bed. However, a few seconds later, he heard the usual piano playing coming from downstairs. He woke.

"Oh, good grief. DOROTHY! R.DOROTHY WAYNERIGHT!!" Roger yelled.

Dorothy came into the room.

"Roger?" Dorothy said.

"Never mind. What's for breakfast?"

"What else, scrambled eggs."

Mr.Smith smiled at his android friend.

THE END. MORE NEXT TIME.-I hope. There will be more with time.

This little scene is in dedication to BabyGhia. I threatened to write it, now here it is. Thank you Pygmalion for helping me edit it.

Woo Hoo, here is 4000th post!!!

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It was a clear and starlit night. The artificial sounds of crickets filled the air outside the Rosewater mansion. The brisk smell of freshly watered grass was swept away by a gentle cool breeze, which was a grateful relief from the mercilessly hot summer day. It seemed like the perfect night for a party.

Alex Rosewater stood outside on his bedroom balcony, watching the dome. He stood still as Jonathan, his assistant, fussed over him.

“It’s a big night, Mr. Rosewater, and you look sharp,” the assistant announced

Alex continued to stare at the artificial stars. Though his master didn’t say anything, Jonathan believed Alex felt it was unnecessary to respond or even acknowledge to unessential statements of the help.

Jonathan briefly walked back into the room to bring Alex his suit coat. “Sir, I must say I am relieved you have taken an interest in being spontaneous, but why all black?”

Annoyance flashed across Alex’s face. He blinked his eyes, then looked down to find Jonathan with the black coat in his hands. “As I told you, this is a masquerade. I am dressed as a poorly dressed and ill-mannered negotiator.”

Sensing the warning in his master’s voice, Jonathan quickly, but gently, assisted Alex with the black coat. He quickly took a lint brush and lightly brushed the shoulders, the lapels, and the back. He walked around Alex once, examining for anything out of place. He realized Alex didn’t have the custom-made sunglasses , so he went inside the bedroom to retrieve them.

He walked towards the dresser where he left them. As he reached for the sunglasses, a metallic hand grasped his. He gave a gasp, though he knew the hand’s owner would be pleased by his surprise.

As he was about to look behind him, the other said, “Now, now, Jonathan, no peeking. You will ruin the surprise. Now tell your master that the party is about to begin.”

Jonathan couldn’t help but shudder. He walked onto the balcony and relayed the message. Intrigued, Alex told him to stay in the balcony and not to look inside the bedroom.

Jonathan wouldn’t dare look as Alex entered the bedroom. “What is this? Red Wig? Black dress? Why are you dressed up in that hideous outfit?”

“I thought you could use an assistant,” the familiar voice said. “Everyone should have one.”

“Alan, take off that ridiculous outfit and put something more appropriate!” Alex demanded.

“You know that I am your android tonight, Negotiator,” Alan purred. There were the sounds of kissing.

“Well, we have a few moments before the party. Dorothy, it’s Showtime!!!” Alex said before the lights turned off.

Jonathan stood outside, trying not to listen to the laughter and moans that emanated from the bedroom. He started when he heard the Alan say in an eerie monotone, “You are such a louse, Mr. Negotiator!”

What a fellow you are, Tony, to be sure. Dangling all this juicy stuff just out of sight.

Good job!

Pygmalion

BLAH, HA, HA ,HA!

Ok, you warned me. So, that's what you were talking about when you visited. I swear, I'm not letting you two alone again. At least include me in the twistedness.

Okay, I like it.

Imagine the story we can come up with.....MWAHAHAHA

Madrona

That made my day! Thanks, Tony!

Trust me, you should be very glad he didn't let you in on the "juicy stuff." The visuals! ! They were pretty scary! And it was all Tony's doing. I just encouraged it.

*shakes head* The things Tony can come up with sometimes.

Kudos!

BabyGhia

PS. Congrats on the 4,000th post! *does happy dance*

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Originally posted by BabyGhia That made my day! Thanks, Tony! Trust me, you should be very glad he didn't let you in on the "juicy stuff." The visuals! ! They were pretty scary! And it was all Tony's doing. I just encouraged it. *shakes head* The things Tony can come up with sometimes. Kudos! BabyGhia PS. Congrats on the 4,000th post! *does happy dance*

What???!!!! You mean there's more?? He's holding back...Hey! what's up with that?
**Goes off to bug Tony about that**

Oh yeah, congrats on #4000.

Madrona

Ok...Evan, that was one of the funniest things I have ever read...

Tony: Why must you fill my mind with such horrible visuals???? I'm goig to need therapy now...

Okay scene: Rodger's Mansion.

Rodger: "Alright Dorothy whats this you wanted to show me...?"

*opens door*

*Sees Dorothy on his bed with a giant black panther*

Rodger: *SHOCKED mouth opened* "ARGHHHHHH!!!!"

Dorothy: "Whats wrong? Its at least the right shade of black right? I also named it Pero Jr."

Rodger screams: "NORMAN!!!!!!!"

HAhahaa!! Yeah thats all I got in my head.... ^-~" I know.. lamo...