[Fan Fiction] ACT 36: BATTLE OF THE WASTELAND, Complete!

Well...I love the story...and I feel sorry for the poor, confused Leviathan...

BUT...

...you stole my Megadeus' name. Big Alpha is my Megadeus in the MFL. -_-

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Originally posted by Jim Starluck Well...I love the story...and I feel sorry for the poor, confused Leviathan... BUT... ...you stole my Megadeus' name. Big Alpha is my Megadeus in the MFL. -_-

I didn't know that. Aren't you glad that I gave the name to (in Dori's opinion at least) an adorable, sexy, masculine Megadeus?

I dunno about that.. Alpha is a pretty damn common name connected to robots.

I was thinking about asking if Big Alpha and I (his Dominus) could've had a cameo in one episode...I'm even using him in an RP on another forum because of the resistance to reality weapons feature that you thought up...

*sighs*

I hope you're planning on submitting this series to the main Paradigm City fanfic list.. it definitely deserves it.

Once again, great Act, ACT!

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Originally posted by Jim Starluck Well...I love the story...and I feel sorry for the poor, confused Leviathan...

I totally agree. It is strangely heartbreaking to see the big ol' robo-dragon wandering around the wastelands, clutching to what basically amounts to a doll out of existential lonelyness.

I hope "mechagodzilla jr." gets a happy ending at some point.

as always, another great installment in your season 3 universe. *thumbs up!*

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Originally posted by Advinius quote: Originally posted by Jim Starluck Well...I love the story...and I feel sorry for the poor, confused Leviathan... I totally agree. It is strangely heartbreaking to see the big ol' robo-dragon wandering around the wastelands, clutching to what basically amounts to a doll out of existential lonelyness.

It reminds me strongly of a scene in Philip Pullman's The Golden Compass, when Lyra is in the Arctic. I don't want to spoil it if you haven't read it already, because it is one of the saddest scenes in the book. Wonderful book.

Pygmalion

Great story. The whole android decoy thing was particularly clever. You know, I wonder if Beck could create a good enough remote interface that Dorothy or Dori would be able to control one and perceive through its senses as if it were their own body. Sort of a telepresence type thing.

Yyaya!! I really really like this one too ACT! i love how Dori negotiates her kidnappers into doing what she says! Thats one woman you don't want to mess with! ^_^""" Great job!!