[Fan Fiction] ACT 29: THE MASTER CRIMINAL. Complete!

I've been reading this and the previous acts on and off all day, and I must say, they're excellent! The characterization is very well done and your plot has me eager to see what's going to happen next. ) I especially love how you've portrayed Angel-- I'm warming up to the idea of her and Dastun together. It'd be good for them. I can't wait for the next installment!

Most impressive, A Clockwork Tomato. I've been reading your Season 3 and I've been impressed from the start. I look forward to the next installment. Keep up the good work!

Wow, I wonder what happened to Beck? Did his Dominus memories come back full-force?

And what role is the other R. Dorothy supposed to play?

Great work, A Clockwork Tomato.

very awesome, I can't wait to see where you take it next! These fanfics are the highlight of my week! Much like Big O was on Sundays. Great job on continuing the series!

** Bowing before A Clockwork Tomato **

Dude, I don't have words to describe how good this story is. Good stuff, man. Good stuff. One thing, I like your new character: Tony, I believe his name is. I can relate to him

Keep it up! I want more. Two R. Dorothy's? Double the pleasure, triple the fun.

P.S. How did you know that I play pool.

Wow. A very, VERY well done story. I'm very impressed. I wonder who this other "Dori" is?

The story had a great...story! I loved it!

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Originally posted by Lady Tesser Wow, I wonder what happened to Beck? Did his Dominus memories come back full-force? And what role is the other R. Dorothy supposed to play?

I could tell you, but then I'd have to kill you.

But I can give you hints. Beck has always been drawn to anything resembling a Megadeus, so we can guess that he's predisposed to this sort of thing. Whether this is a matter of "memories" or not is open to argument. One theory is that Roger's visions aren't even his, but come from Big O. They are certainly more intrusive when he's in the cockpit than at other times.

The other R. Dorothy will play the role she chooses to play, which I can predict with confidence will not be the role that other people assign to her.

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Unibasu wrote: Wow. A very, VERY well done story. I'm very impressed. I wonder who this other "Dori" is? The story had a great...story! I loved it!

Glad you liked it. (I was afraid it might not have enough Beck in it for you ) You'll find out lots and lots and lots about Dori in Act 30.

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tvperez wrote: Dude, I don't have words to describe how good this story is. Good stuff, man. Good stuff. One thing, I like your new character: Tony, I believe his name is. I can relate to him Keep it up! I want more. Two R. Dorothy's? Double the pleasure, triple the fun. P.S. How did you know that I play pool.

There's nothing to do at the Speakeasy except talking, drinking, and playing pool. Presumably, you learned to play pool specifically so you could be in this scene.

(And thanks to everyone I didn't quote for their kind words.)

heh. a delightfully tangled web you've got going there, ACT. eagerly awaiting the next dose... er, episode.

Wow, it just gets better and better Can't wait for the next act

I'd say master deciever rather than master criminal. Unless deception itself is a crime. I agree that the nightmares Roger had would come from Big O. The imagery in the series suggests that the POV is not Roger's, therefore the next logical choice must be Big O.

I am now thouroughy intregued by all of this. I am really pleased that you got rid of those two cronies that Beck always worked with. And it is now clear the Beck is takeing a new direction with his life. What that is I can not determine at this time.

Also you keep refering to Big O's cromebuster. If you read the robot features on Bif O, you will notice that the eye lasers are the more approperate weapon to use in the situations you discribed in this act. The cromebuster is a high energy beam cannon, the eye lasers can be used in many different ways and do not require the fireing sequence that the cromebuster does. Eye lasers were featured on all 3 of the bigs, but each had a different speciality weapon as well, Fau the rotating beam guns, Duo the heavy missles in the legs and Big O had a super eye laser aka the Cromebuster. The crome buster could not be so accurate as to pick off the small androids alone and not fry anything else in the process.
Sorry if a seem to be ranting on and on. but this is just one of those things that hit me and being the mecha guru that I am I had to point out and explain.

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Originally posted by Wingnut Also you keep refering to Big O's cromebuster. If you read the robot features on Bif O, you will notice that the eye lasers are the more approperate weapon to use in the situations you discribed in this act.

Whoops! I'll update the episodes just as soon as I get around to it (and not a second before). No point having things wrong then they can just as easily be right. Thanks for pointing it out.

Nobody ever refers to the eye lasers by name in the show, do they? The name is boring. Lasers -- how Sixties! (Now if they were, say Thirties, it would be cool.) I'll use a spiffy new name for them if I can think of one. Names are hard.

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Originally posted by A Clockwork Tomato quote: Originally posted by Wingnut Also you keep refering to Big O's cromebuster. If you read the robot features on Bif O, you will notice that the eye lasers are the more approperate weapon to use in the situations you discribed in this act. Whoops! I'll update the episodes just as soon as I get around to it (and not a second before). No point having things wrong then they can just as easily be right. Thanks for pointing it out. Nobody ever refers to the eye lasers by name in the show, do they? The name is boring. Lasers -- how Sixties! (Now if they were, say Thirties, it would be cool.) I'll use a spiffy new name for them if I can think of one. Names are hard.

How about Optic beams. or something along those lines?

I read your acts and I'm just speechless You must be one of the best writers I've ever read the work of. It's like the show never ended. You have such a gift for imagery!!!
I can't wait til next Sunday!!!! I'm so curious about Dorothy's sister
Keep up the amazing work
<<Bows to the greatness that is A Clockwork Tomato>>

Hahha again excellent wrok ACT! I knew it just had to be! Angel and Beck! Lol! Excellent story! ^_^"""