[Fan Fiction] Big O Parallel Universe

Lady Tesser 03-26-2004 11:13 AM
Hello, darlings.

Just an update. Act 4 is about half done and looking quite good. Dog-chan and I have been brainstorming the background of this particular version of the Big-O-verse and came up with some original ideas which will start appearing in act 13 when we get to it.

That's definitely Roxanne needing some chocolate, Dog-chan. I'll donate my change to the 'Roxy Needs Real Chocolate Fund', set up by R. Dorian Wayneright and managed by Ms. Norma Burg. Big Grin

I'll be gone this weekend (3/26 - 3/30) so I'm afraid I won't be seeing anything of Paradigm City until Tuesday or so. Just be assured the text is being worked on. If there are any comments, suggestions, etc, private message C.R Foxhound with them - I'm leaving him in 'command' (if there is any need to) of RP while I'm gone. ^_^

This is my last post for a few days. Will I survive? *hugs*
C.R Foxhound 03-26-2004 01:42 PM
YES!!! I AM IN COMMAND!!! I AM KING!!! BOW BEFORE MY MIGHTY MIGHTYNESS!!!!!!

ehh...whatever...

anyway, see you then Tess, have a good time going whereever

*needs to finish fics Frown *
NVWC2006 04-30-2004 07:42 PM
Wow, has it really been over a month since the last post?
This thread only seems to be staying out in the open by being made an important thread.
However, I want to say that I am still interested in this Parallel Universe to the real Paradigm City and that I hope Act 4 and other Acts will come up, I am intent on reading them.
JinguJ 07-05-2004 04:44 AM
no ones alive?
pen1300 07-05-2004 07:18 AM
quote:
Originally posted by JinguJ
no ones alive?


We're still around. I'm still thinking about the Chocolate story but really haven't gotten anywhere. I have yet another brainstorm...

I want a picture! Someone want to draw a pic of Roxanne enjoying her chocolate brownies?

Later,
Pen1300
Lady Tesser 07-05-2004 07:21 AM
*sneaks in* Still interest? Then I should work on it again ... still stuck in the same place from three months ago ...

*skulks off, needing to watch Act 4 again and get back into the groove*
NVWC2006 07-05-2004 07:14 PM
WHAT?!

You weren't working before?!

I thought that you were busily at it, typing feverishly to perfect your story for all this time!

Sheesh, c'mon, you must obey your loyal fanbase, no?
pen1300 07-05-2004 08:01 PM
quote:
Originally posted by NVWC2006
WHAT?!

You weren't working before?!

I thought that you were busily at it, typing feverishly to perfect your story for all this time!

Sheesh, c'mon, you must obey your loyal fanbase, no?

She's not the only one! I too have been slacking! I have very little to show for what I am supposed to contribute.

Later,
Pen1300
C.R Foxhound 07-06-2004 11:21 AM
quote:
Originally posted by pen1300
quote:
Originally posted by NVWC2006
WHAT?!

You weren't working before?!

I thought that you were busily at it, typing feverishly to perfect your story for all this time!

Sheesh, c'mon, you must obey your loyal fanbase, no?

She's not the only one! I too have been slacking! I have very little to show for what I am supposed to contribute.

Later,
Pen1300


They aint the only ones Frown
JinguJ 07-11-2004 04:48 AM
I'm the biggest slacker of all. ^ ^;
Lady Tesser 07-11-2004 08:25 AM
No, you're not. You rely on text to do your artwork, and I haven't been providing the text in months.

Erg ... I really need to get back to work on this since it started as my baby, right? Somebody kick me in the butt, please.
C.R Foxhound 07-11-2004 11:40 AM
quote:
Originally posted by Lady Tesser
No, you're not. You rely on text to do your artwork, and I haven't been providing the text in months.

Erg ... I really need to get back to work on this since it started as my baby, right? Somebody kick me in the butt, please.


Big Grin Gladly!!!!

*gets tackled then smacked by a wombat*

Ugh, i should have finished my tory, u know what, ill start on it today, this is kinda crazy, leaving it for so long

and who knows, maybe this could be season 3, it could happen...i hope
Lady Tesser 07-11-2004 07:02 PM
Season Three - on the flipside of Paradigm ... Didn't we discuss this before?

Voice Caster: "Yeah, David Lucas? Okay, Steve Blum, or whatever name you're going by this season. We want you back for 'Big O' - only you play Angel this time - and we'll have Wendee Lee play Smith ... hello?"

Get to work, Tess ...
Lady Tesser 08-04-2004 11:39 AM
Okay. I just got done working five days in a row, so I'm somewhat braindead at the moment. However, I do have a little something to share so bear with me as I slowly churn this out. *still needs to see Act 4 again*

* * * * * * * * * *

Big O Reciprocal Paradigm
Act 4: "Underground Terror"
Text by Lady Tesser

'Let's just say, if what happened forty years ago didn't exist, man would still be a creature that fears the dark. Fear comes from not knowing; he then averts his eyes from that fear and acts as if he never had any memories of his life, of his history, of a very beginning ... '
- Michelle Seebach, 'Paradigm Press' reporter

* * *

The room was old, barren, spartan in appearance, with peeling wallpaper and dirty windows. An old woman, one who had once been a fair flower of the City Before Paradigm, sat in a quiet rocking chair as she spoke: "If I stay here I think my son - when he gets his memories back - he might come to see me." She paused. "When I think about that, I could never leave. I would never do that to my boy."

Roxanne Smith, privately skeptical but never one to crush hopes, replied in her low voice, "It's all right. The residential records still show that you live here; even if you move, everything will work out. There's nothing to worry about."

The thug - er, residential administrator - in the doorway grunted to himself.

* * *

Roxanne coolly patted the back of her large black french-twist and pulled her sunglasses on as she exited the derelict building. "Please transfer the funds by the time we agreed upon," she intimated professionally toward the goon - er, residential administrator.

"Fine," he replied, then called, "Negotiator - "

"My work here is done," Roxanne reminded him, opening the door of the Griffon.

"This is about a new job," he added. "I hear my parent company is interested in hiring you."

She narrowed her eyes. "Your 'parent' company?" In thought, she added, 'Is that what they're calling themselves nowadays? I thought they had the maternal feelings of a rabid wolverine ... whatever that is.'
NVWC2006 08-04-2004 12:19 PM
O.O NEED MORE! You can't just leave us hanging at THAT, what about the rest of the Act? That's only the very beginning! In the real show, they didn't even start playing any music or show the Act title until after that scene, WE NEED MORE!!!!



please?
Lady Tesser 08-04-2004 12:31 PM
Okay, okay. Here's a little more, plus an illo by JinguJ.

* * * * * * * * * *

Roxanne drove through Paradigm City toward the Central Dome.

[Whether you're a bread store or a real estate agency or Military Police for that matter, it doesn't make a bit of difference. When you say 'parent company' it always means the same place.
In this city, the firm called Paradigm is considered both God and State.]

Roxanne entered the main business center of Paradigm Corporation, the heart of Paradigm City's government and businessworld. In this area, she was hardly out of place - her short-skirted black business suit blended in with the other businesswomen and men rushing around the promenade.

"Roxanne Smith," a male voice stated behind her.

"Hm?" She turned - and recognized someone from her recent past. "It's you."

Casey Valasquez - Angel - stood before her. Not in his last costume of leather pants and duster, but his nicely-cut brown three piece suit and rose-tinted glasses. His hair was slicked back, the longer strands making a ducktail in the back.

"I work as an executive assistant for Phil Gasse," he stated, offering his hand to shake. "He's the publisher of 'Paradigm Press'."

Roxanne fully turned and accepted his hand in her gloved hand to shake. "This is not our first encounter," she answered with a smirk.

"Just call me Patrick Diaz."

* * *

Roxanne sat on one side of the elevator car in the plush seat while the man identifying himself as 'Patrick Diaz' sat across from her on the other side.

"As I recall," Roxanne pressed in. "The name you gave me last time was 'Mr. Valasquez'."

He did not answer her, his eyes remained closed as he listened to the elevator tracks click.

Roxanne narrowed her eyes and snorted, then popped a chocolate in her mouth. People with ulterior motives always annoyed her to no end.

The floor counter clicked to their floor, and the cab came to a stop. Both stepped out to the stairway platform, the man brushing past her.

"Didn't I tell you that you could call me 'Angel'?" he reminded her softly as his black eyes swept over her body before turning back to business.

Roxanne felt her breath catch as she watched him ascend the staircase. Damn, he was a smoothie. And he had a nice butt, too.

* * *

R. Dorian Wayneright stared at the Sacred Monster - ie: Roxanne Smith's desk. The desk was large, gorgeous, black lacquered, the nerve center of her work, as well as holding her holy collection of snowglobes.

With the duster in hand, he continued to stare at the globes, the water within them magnifying the scenes of castles and angels and fairies and flowers and long-forgotten cityscapes, all of them finely sculpted and placed on intricately-carved bases.

He lifted one up, swirled it around, and placed it on the desk, allowing the recessed light to sparkle off the whirling glitter. He picked up the next one to do the same, then the next, then the next ...

At last, nearly thirty snowglobes were active, the glitter and snow within the glass spheres twirling and dancing around.

Dorian half-watched the light play off the materials, while his thoughts drifted to his employer. He hoped Roxanne was all right, she was going to get in trouble with that mouth of hers someday.

* * *

"Aren't you fed up with a job that isn't worth your time?" Angel asked as both he and Roxanne left the main office of the 'Paradigm Press'.

"And exactly how long have you been working here?" she asked in response.

"Exactly a week," he answered, smiling sunnily at her.

Roxanne's face turned business. "So, what are you after now?"

"After?" he asked in mock-offense, the smile turning up in flirtatiousness. "I'm just an ordinary man ... "

Roxanne felt her heart beating like a triphammer. Damn it, why couldn't he just be another thug or something? Not this ... incredibly delicious specimen of manhood, reeking -

'Calm down, Roxy,' she told herself. 'Mysterious pasts and mysterious motives means I would be the one to die under mysterious circumstances.'

They entered the elevator car again and descended back down to the main level of the Paradigm Building.

Another car passed them, going up. Inside, a middle-aged woman sat comfortably while she was listening on the phone. Her black hair was pulled tightly back from her face, eliminating the need for a face lift, but this only illustrated the fact that plastic surgery could not save her. As a man, she would have been passable but ugly, as the woman she was ... she may be the reason why 2% of the male population of Paradigm City was gay.

"Alexia Rosewater," Angel stated, watching the woman's car pass their own.

"Paradigm's Chief Executive," Roxanne finished, her mouth already turned into a frown. "Otherwise known as God's older, snottier sister."

Angel gazed at her, then laughed.
NVWC2006 08-04-2004 12:56 PM
O.O well, that was a bit more, but still, more is neccesary! I shall never understand the deal with chocolate... Or why someone would have 30 snow globes on their desk Tongue . I mean, hourglasses tell time! Snow globes make good paperweights... and as far as I can tell, that's it. Oh well, one thing no one shall understand about the mysterious Roxanne Smith.
As for Alexia Rosewater...ouch. that's all i can say to her.
Keep up the good work, let's see a megadeus battle soon! Big Grin
evanASF27 08-04-2004 02:49 PM
w00t!!!!! *whole 1000+ audiance applaudes*

...o_O...where'd they come from!?

anyways....COOL!! @_@ I love the story Big Grin Can't wait to see the second half ^___^
Pygmalion 08-04-2004 03:10 PM
quote:
Originally posted by Lady Tesser
Another car passed them, going up. Inside, a middle-aged woman sat comfortably while she was listening on the phone. Her black hair was pulled tightly back from her face, eliminating the need for a face lift, but this only illustrated the fact that plastic surgery could not save her. As a man, she would have been passable but ugly, as the woman she was ... she may be the reason why 2% of the male population of Paradigm City was gay.

Why does the image of Yzma from The Emperor's New Groove flash into my mind at this description?

Pygmalion
Lady Tesser 08-04-2004 03:51 PM
Not exactly whom I had in mind, Auntie Pyg, but the idea is exactly the same. ^_^

The snowglobes are an intricate part of the symbolism that is part of Reciprocal Big O - otherwise, there is nothing more to say. As for the chocolate ... it's "Chocolate"! What explanation is there??

A little more. I've written this all a while ago.

* * * * * * * * * *

'Do you think man can survive cut off from his memories of the past? He, having no idea how long he's been there, or where he's from or what he's connected to?'
- Michelle Seebach

* * *

[This new job was to convince Michelle Seebach, a reporter with 'Paradigm Press', to hand over a manuscript she's been working on in exchange for a very *large* retirement package.
The job itself isn't difficult, but it presents two problems: first, uncertainty if I should take a job from a department so close to Paradigm HQ; and yet, more importantly, the fact that Seebach just three months ago had apparently disappeared.]

Major Danielle Dastun leaned back in her chair, yawning. She sat up as Roxanne poured coffee into a disposible cup. It almost felt ... normal ... having Roxanne in her office again and both talking incidentials and sharing chocolate stashes.

"How long ago did you resort to taking these PI jobs ... Miz Negotiator?" Dani inquired in her alcohol-abused voice.

Roxanne turned back to her and smiled painfully, not answering.

Dani continued, "There are only two roads that can be taken by people who up and quit the Police." She motioned an assistant to bring in the files he held. "They can become private investigators and disturb people's lives, or as part of a legal organization to destroy people's lives."

"All I want is information on the woman I'll be negotiating with," Roxanne answered.

"You know, I'm just a little nostalgic since I haven't seen you here in a long time, Roxanne Smith." Her smile curled up in a smirk. "Now I remember how much of a pain-in-the-ass you are during a case."

Roxanne grinned and raised her coffee cup in a toast.

Dani opened a cabinet and pulled out a file. "Michelle Seebach," she read. "She's a German gal, whatever that means. Missing persons report been filed, taxes unpaid two months."

"You mean she hasn't left the city?" Roxanne asked as she glanced at the file.

"Nope," Dani answered, unwrapping a chocolate then placing it in her mouth. "Someone who has had the good fortune to live inside the Domes would never leave them."

Roxanne noted the mix of envy and disgust in Dani's voice and agreed whole-heartedly with the disgust.

"That's just how it is," Dani finished.

"I see."

Roxanne gathered her coat up and made her way out the door.

"Roxy," Dani called.

Roxanne turned and caught the ball of paper Dani threw at her. She opened it to find an address scribbled on it.

"Looks as though that vanished reporter of yours has been leading a double life," Dani added cheerfully. "She lived with her fiance, but she's also renting that apartment." She paused, becoming stone serious. "You may have quit the force out of disgust, but don't you forget the rest of us here are proud of the Military Police."

Roxanne crumpled the paper up in her fist. "I want to thank you for your help on this one, Dastun." She left, shutting the door.

Dani leaned back and sighed, then turned to look at her display case. She uprighted a frame of her and Roxanne and a couple of the guys in officer uniforms from a few years ago, the sepia tones of the photograph strengthening the comraderie even further by the monochromatic blending of their faces and uniforms.