[Fan Fiction] Big O Parallel Universe

Very good, Jingu. ^_^

Schwarzald (spell it in two words - 'Schwarz' [black] 'wald' [forest]) - yes, I like this very much. It is quite how I imagined her. I do like the jabot at the neck, which is elegant but also keeping in character. There's not doubting there's a female under there.

Alexia - Husband comments she looks like the mean old woman who turned into the Wicked Witch of the West from 'The Wizard of Oz'. ^_^ Different from what I expected. I figured Alexia was a participant of the 'good life' - quite curvy due to rich food, vain with her hair and make-up. (*looks at pic again* Damn, she is UGLY - looks like Alex in drag.) This is really up to you, but if you can, draw Alexia as a vain, middle-aged woman with big curly hair, thick make-up (especially eyeliner), and a slightly more rounded body.

Roxanne - I really love this rendition of her. She's being business and here's Angel trying to be smooth at her. I like the harder look, balanced with the skirt slit. She's gorgeous the way she is.

Angel - as the original Angel had two looks (secretary and terrorist babe), so does our boy. I take it this is his 'adventuring' look, minus his leather duster. As his 'secretary' persona, he's very polished with his hair slicked back and wearing a three piece suit (jacket, pants, and vest) and wearing a pair of rose-tinted glasses (perched on the end of his nose and looking over them ... being sexy).

I like the dynamics of that picture - of Roxanne and Angel - because it really shows off their personalities and power. Roxanne with her mask of professionalism, and Angel with his knowing smirk.

Dorian - this is quite a dynamic piece, really showing off his energy. I have no idea what his electric guitar looks like, so you can look up guitars online and draw what you like. The only thing I specified is that it's emerald green. I do love his hair!

Superb job, Jingu. I love these!

WOW! I LOVE THESE PICS! These are great references!

Schwarzald: Oh! Love the outfit! She's so crazy, but classy!

Alexia: Actually, in my story I'm working on, this is how Alexia looks (due to episode issues, she's actually younger looking) but this is how I thought she'd look...*shrugs*

Roxanne: Different? How is she different? She looks the same to me and I love her look!

Angel: I want to go out with that guy! That's how he looks in my head for my story.

Dorian: can I have him too? He's soooooo cute! These are great!

Do Alanna next! I want to see her (as she's in the story too and I want to see what she looks like!) I wanted to draw her but I couldn't get a good idea...Oh well.

NICE WORK, I love them!

Later,
Pen1300

Good work JinguJ! Love the pictures ....

Roxanne: I can see a slight diffrence in her hair and nose, but she still looks like your older drawings....good job!

Alexia: I agree with Wingnut, she is freeky, but she still looks like Alex

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Schwarzwald: I had a fealing that would be how she would look ...

Angel: You did a really good job on him...Kind of reminds me of Toya from Ceres a bit.

Dorian: Also a good job ...Also the guitar is a good tuch....

And yes, do Allana...because I am also curious to what she will look like....

And I don't know if you have a name for the male Vera yet, but how about Vincent, or Vance. I just wanted to help'ya out a bit....If you alredy have a name then sorry I didn't want to go back and look.

Eep. Okay, I take it back. Keep Alexia the way she is ... perhaps I made her too pretty in my mind ... Actually, this Alexia is starting to grow on me.

A bun tight enough to stretch her face out, eliminating the need for a face lift, but just enough to point out that plastic surgery couldn't save her, either. As a man, she would have been passible but ugly, but since she was a woman ... I try not to think of the fact that we share an X-chromosome. - Roxanne Smith's private thoughts on Madame President Alexia Rosewater

I can work with this. ^_^

This will be the layout of the site

What do you think ? I need to know what's the name, Recipro-something Paradigm

^_^; is it okay? Is Roxanne looks too much like male roger?

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Brilliant, Jingu. I love the dramatic shading. She looks perfect - one can tell she's supposed to be a female Roger and still looks gorgeous.

The name is 'Reciprocal Paradigm'.

If you need any other information, just ask C.R Foxhound or myself.

can anyone fill the 'about' and 'cast' section?

You know when someone, out of the blue, interested and dunno what the hey is RP ^^ so the about section is for that

And the staff section, should I copy from the old RP site or there are new people added/sorted?

If you can answer/help me ASAP, I'll be most grateful

And if there's another artists beside me, please let me know. I need help too. ^^

And I'll draw the rest for now.

So far, this is the staff that I know of -

Head Writer:
Lady Tesser

Co-Writers:
C.R Foxhound
pen1300

Head Artist:
JinguJ

Character Designers:
Rouge
Unibasu

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Info blurb:

"Roxanne Smith is Paradigm City's top Negotiator. She solves all sorts of problems for all sorts of people. And when things get rough, she's got some pretty big back-up: The Big O, a giant robot from an era long gone and forgotten.

Forty years ago, The Event happened. Everyone - both human and android - lost their memories. Memories are more precious than money; the possession of memories leads to holding power over the known world.

But yet, quietly in the background, there is someone orchestrating something bigger, involving Roxanne Smith, the android R. Dorian Wayneright, and the future of the human race.

Is Roxanne really Roxanne Smith? Or as her own forgotten memories indicate was she really a man named Roger Smith? What does Dorian have to do with any of this? And does The Big O know something she doesn't?

In Reciprocal Paradigm, The Big O continues on ... "

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Acceptable?

Oh, yeah, I heard Crystalline was working on some drawings. Have to find out how she's doing on that.

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Originally posted by JinguJ This will be the layout of the site What do you think ? I need to know what's the name, Recipro-something Paradigm ^_^; is it okay? Is Roxanne looks too much like male roger?

Dude, this rocks on so many levels. Awesome work.

Kudos.

Thanks. XD

How about the cast section? Any Description for the characters ? Or not yet?


And yes, I'll be waiting. Now I'll be drawing the pics.

I'm going to redraw act 1

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Originally posted by JinguJ Thanks. XD How about the cast section? Any Description for the characters ? Or not yet? And yes, I'll be waiting. Now I'll be drawing the pics. I'm going to redraw act 1

Why not use the info on the first page, i think its the third post

I think she means short bios of the characters - the ones I have on the first page aren't as accurate considering the evolution we've put them through on the thread.

Does anyone want to do this?

JinguJ, that's a very nice picture. I think you have Roxanne portrayed just right. And I'm a sucker for stark layouts like yours.

Pygmalion

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Originally posted by Lady Tesser I think she means short bios of the characters - the ones I have on the first page aren't as accurate considering the evolution we've put them through on the thread. Does anyone want to do this?

oh...

yea...

whoops, i guess they have changed

you're gonna use the logo right? i mean, thats a tight logo, best logo ever

I'd be interested in trying to do the character descriptions, a few anyway. I sadly don't believe I know them THAT well, but I could attempt it if you want some help.

Jingu, that looks...AWESOME! I love the coloring and shading and just the coolness of the site! WONDERFUL!

I really need to attempt doing some of my fanfic, again, that is on the other computer...

Hey, LT, do you want help writing up some of the acts? I wouldn't mind picking up some of the later ones like Winter Night Phantom and R.D.

Later,
Pen1300

Actually, I would appreciate it, pen. By then we should have the rhythym of all the characters down and you'll know what to do. And I'm curious as to how R.D the character would be handled. (I have an idea; PM me if you want to know.) Not to mention Angel Rosewater in place of Gordon.

And Character Bios ... hmm. Something short and sweet.

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Roxanne Smith - Paradigm City's top Negotiator. Roxanne is a no-nonsense women with a knack for crime-solving and going the extra mile for clients. She pilots the black and purple Megadeus known as The Big O and drives the sleek, fine-tuned Griffon. Living in an abandoned bank with Norma Burg and R. Dorian Wayneright, Roxanne is drawn into the mysterious past of Paradigm City to save its future.
She is also a chocolate addict.

R. Dorian Wayneright - A guitar-playing android orphaned by the senseless death of his creator Dr. Tina Wayneright. He lives with Roxanne Smith as her butler and sometimes case-assistant, when he's not waking her up with wild guitar solos and sweetening her coffee. He is quiet, sarcastic, and fiercely loyal to Roxanne, and 'somebody higher up' seems to known there's more to him than meets the eye.

Norma Burg - Roxanne's housekeeper and Big O's mechanic, Norma is a prim servant who runs the house just-so. When her help is needed, she dons her leathers and arrives on her motorcycle, complete with an array of heavy-duty guns. She is known for her black eyepatch and black aprons with crazy slogans embroidered on them.

Big Ear - Obviously an operative, Big Ear hangs out at the Speakeasy and gives Roxanne information for a price. She is Inconspicuous and mysterious, but her role as the Greek Chorus is invaluable to both Roxanne and the readers.

Beth Gold (AKA Janice Beth) - Claiming herself to be Roxanne's greatest rival-villian, Beth's attention seems to have focused on both humiliating and trying to kill Roxanne. Her mecha designs, though elaborate and ingenius, are sorely lacking in areas of physics and strategy. Believing herself to be the Crown-Princess of Crime, Beth is little more than a slightly dangerous theif, extortionist, and kidnapper. She has two female goons named Dove and T-Bone.

Danielle Dastun - Known to everyone as 'Dani', Dastun is a Major in the Paradigm City Military Police. Hard as nails and practically married to the force, she places lives first and foremost in her job. Dealing with Megadeuses having random battles on her turf, Dani would be glad to see them in a scrap pile - although she is pleased to have the black and purple Megadeus take care of the others. Dani is a secret chocolate addict, which she keeps under control better than Roxanne.

Angel - The mysterious man in Roxanne's life, his story is that he's looking for Memories to sell, but Roxanne has a feeling he's after more than just Memories. Sauve, cool, and ready to sacrifice others to get what he wants, he meets his match in the unwavering Roxanne Smith. He enjoys playing cat-and-mouse with her and even develops an affection for her, which he hides in barbs and flippancy. Goes by several aliases, works as Madame President Alexia Rosewater's secretary.

Schwarzwald - Once known as Michelle Seebach, her drive to know the Truth of what happened 40 years ago drove her mad when she discovered the long-abandoned Archetype beneath the city. She has become a Terrorist of Truth, believing she can force people to awaken and find the Truth for themselves. Declaring Roxanne a pawn of Paradigm, she also knows Roxanne is closer to the Truth than anyone else in the city. Schwarzwald's use of guerilla-tactics to make people see the Truth has resulted in the loss of lives and damage to property.

Madame President Alexia Rosewater - President of the Paradigm Group (incidently, the president-for-life of Paradigm City), Alexia took up ruling the known world after her mother Angel retired. She has no compassion for those outside the domes, and rumor says she has no compassion for anyone inside, either. Described as bitter and pompous, Alexia is focused on attaining Memories for power ...
At least, that's what it looks like.

Angel Rosewater - Mother of Alexia, Angel is an old woman living in the Aisleberry Dome and looking after the agricultural food production for the city. Her own past is even more mysterious than the world before the Event, and she seems to know more than what her apparent senility is telling.

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Anyone else? Should I include Instra? Alanna Gabriel? Victor/Viktor Ronstadt?

well...

i dunno about instra, i'll be using her a lil bit, but not much

Alanna and V.R probably shouldn't come till ep 13/14 or whatever

Yea, i gotta scanner

Yea, i drew Roxanne

Yea, i can do better

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Originally posted by C.R Foxhound Yea, i gotta scanner Yea, i drew Roxanne

She looks so sad! Feed that gal some chocolate!

Pygmalion

P.S. C.R, nice work. Here's a Roxie-shaped dog biscuit!

This could be Roxanne's version of Roger's bedhead thing. Just woke up, hair all slicked back and flat as opposed to how it normally is. The expression on her face makes me think that.