[Fan Fiction] Big O Parallel Universe

Hey, that's a great idea - Instra taking Dorian out to the blues/jazz sections for his education. Need to think about that for future episodes ... and mini-fics.

Count Basie, Charlie Parker, BB King ...

Good going, Dog-chan. ^_^

another suggestion

Maybe Roxanne should have different kinds of chocolate like:

Rainy Day chocolate
before dinner chocolate
after dinner chocolate
during dinner chocolate
thinking chocolate
just for the hell of it chocolate
chocolate that doesnt mess up my suit
messy chocolate
late night chocolate
while taking a bath chocolate
when im sick chocolate(this one has vitamins!)
we have come to terms chocolate
no side chocolate
and of course her newest edition...

when dorian pisses me off chocolate...

and should Roxanne have a gym somewhere?

C.R Foxhound

Don't worry about it. I'm not going to get whiny over something I thought was shaky to begin with. That's why it was a test drawing. I want to make something better, because this wasn't it. I would like to see a girl-type "Big" and it's been an interesting challenge for me.

That and it gave me some time off from drawing members of the Smith household making out with housewares.

I did another version while half watching the baseball game last night that's a lot more orthodox than the "Hedwig and the Angry Mech" version. Maybe this will be closer. I'll keep trying anyway.

Starting to get there, Falcon. If you can, rewatch 'Negotiation with the Dead' which has Glinda in it - perfect example of a female Megadeus body.

I was thinking Big O would have the helmet, but make it more ornate with filigree, as well as filigree designs on the major armor areas.

Other Roxanne Chocolates, Dog-chan:

Bad Day Chocolate
Morning Chocolate
PMS Chocolate
Balcony Chocolate
Getting Stuck with Angel Chocolate (minty!)
Pre-Battle Chocolate
Post-Battle Chocolate
Chocolate Stash Just for the Griffon
Special Chocolate for that Special Aggravation Caused By Meeting With Paradigm Ghouls
Dani's Favorite Chocolate for When She Visits

*sigh* I love Chocolate

I love that female Big O, but yes it should have a more Glindaish look

Oh, boy.

I watched Act 2 again last night (thanks to ... my 'friend' ... Kazaa).

I need to do a lot of rewriting on my RP version. Well, maybe bits here and there, but still enough to warrant a major operation. Especially the scene at the Nightingale.

Oy. Back to the merciless slave-master writer and the sadistic muse who delights in keeping perfection out of my reach.

(AARRGH!!! Two weeks until Science Fiction Writers of Earth Contest deadline and I don't have a single story to enter!!! SMEG!)

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Bad Day Chocolate Morning Chocolate PMS Chocolate Balcony Chocolate Getting Stuck with Angel Chocolate (minty!) Pre-Battle Chocolate Post-Battle Chocolate Chocolate Stash Just for the Griffon Special Chocolate for that Special Aggravation Caused By Meeting With Paradigm Ghouls Dani's Favorite Chocolate for When She Visits Rainy Day chocolate before dinner chocolate after dinner chocolate during dinner chocolate thinking chocolate just for the hell of it chocolate chocolate that doesnt mess up my suit messy chocolate late night chocolate while taking a bath chocolate when im sick chocolate(this one has vitamins!) we have come to terms chocolate no side chocolate when dorian pisses me off chocolate..

Wow...that's a lot of chocolate! (That's gonna be VERY expensive!) I'm guessing chocolate is gonna be Roxanne's vice, like Roger's "wet vices"?

"Norma, what is the status on Rainy Day and Dani's chocolate?" Roxanne asks as she walks down the hall undoing her tie.
"Well, ma'am, we have one hundred pounds of real chocolate and ten of synthetic," Norma quotes perfectly.
"Just one hundred?" Roxanne yells surprised.
"I made it one hundred this morning when you asked," Norma replies, taking the tie.
"How does the chocolate account look? The money for the REAL chocolate?" Roxanne asks, falling onto a sofa. In the corner, Dorian plays softly.
"It is falling below your comfort level, Mistress Roxanne," Norma replies.
"Well, get it up to that level!" she shouts.
"About your money...." Norma begins. Dorian plays louder when Roxanne begins shouting profanities.

OH well. I don't know what that was for. I guess a bit from what I have THOUGHT up. I guess I should write that. I've been in the mood lately...

YES! Roxanne should have a gym somewhere I believe! I mean, she'll eat a ton of chocolate and rush to work it off! Then there is always her working out cause she's ticked. Just random thoughts.

Later,
Pen1300

Prince-Consort: At least she isn't mainlining it.
Me: That's next week.

I've ready stuck in some chocolate references in act 2 ... I'm so bad.

Act 2's operation is coming along. Rewatched the anime again to get some ideas of dialogue down. Still different from the anime. *shrug*

Almost done.

How are you doing with real life interrupting your work, Jingu?

Act 2 is done, you may rejoice!

(Peanut Galley back row, probably Sixfortyfive: About friggin' time!)

I'll be sending it off to Six-chan. I think he mentioned something about being busy with schoolwork this weekend, so he'll have a present in his email when he looks it up.

Any particular scene you guys want spoiled? Or you all wanna be surprised?

Spoil me everythig

**gets hit by a brick***

Ahhhh!!! X__X

ummm....Maybe a sneak peek of the first part of the fic?

**gets hit by two bricks**

AAAHHH!! X___X

Alright I'll wait

Hmm, I see no problem in posting the first scene or two. Lemme dig it up ...

Heh. Not enough to cause fits, but it's the first scene.

* * *

Dorian I falling backward, Dorian II and Major Dastun in the shadow of his fall ...

Big O's hand reached out, shielding the two figures with her hand. Dastun covered her head out of instinct.

Dorian I crashed to the ground, causing a miniature earthquake within the dome.

Danielle Dastun blinked her eyes rapidly, then raised her head and looked around, seeing she was in the hand of Big O.

"Megadeus?" she breathed. "Did you ... just save me?"

Inside the cockpit, Roxanne Smith exhaled, smiling in relief. She and Danielle may not have seen eye to eye on anything related to the application of law, but Dani was too good a friend to get smashed by a giant robot.

Not to mention Dorian -

"Hey, where did Dorian go?"

* * *

*shrug* Time goes too slow, as does writing and remembering dialogue. (Gee, I need sleep, I'm babbling.)

Give me the second act and I'll draw it right away ;P

....its really too bad that we all cant find someway to chat with each other like in a chatroom, i think it would be very helpful in discussing ideas and whatnot


chocolate....

I am chocolate deprived now

Oh and maybe AIM? or MSN? preferably MSN??

[Jedi Mind Trick] Your Chocolate is mine [/End Jedi Mind Trick]

What'chu doin' wavin' you fingers like you some sorta Jedi?? ^_^

And no Megadeus is large enough to take away MY chocolate!

Roxanne: You'll have to come through Big O first, Schwarzwald, before you get ANY of my REAL chocolate!
Schwarzwald: The truth of REAL chocolate shall be known, Roxanne Smith!

Seriously ....
I sent act 2 to Jingu for her to read and draw from. I'm dreading act 3 - Electric City - because I don't have a manga version to work from. Guess I'll have to audio record it from my hubby's computer download.

Anything you guys would like to see in act 3? Anything about male Angel, the interactions between Roxanne and Angel, Dorian waking up Roxanne the first time, the generic experiment itself?

"Look, it's Old Woman!" Or should it be kept as "Old Man"?

keep it old man >_< That other way sounds...>_<

ehh for angel's alias:

Miguel Santos
Juan Rodriguez
Marcos Colon
Joaquin Fernandez
Carlos Bastante
Fidel Castro

....wait....

forget the last one.....

i dunno,didnt Rouge say she knows hw to speak spanish, ask her im just some gringo in LA.

anyhow, i have aim(but i never use it)

COLON???? *giggles uncontrollably*

I know, someone probably does have that last name ...

No message services - I'd get bombarded by eight at once like I always did when I had AOL. I like my computer not crashing.

I haven't started on act three yet. Doesn't it start with Dorothy waking Roger up? Have to look at it again.

Since Angel is Hispanic, I would prefer to have Angel say cryptic statements in Spanish, as a double cover.

Question: If Paradigm City is Manhattan, we can assume there was a huge melting pot of people leftover from the event. People would probably remember their birth languages before their second languages, so there would be, among others, a community speaking Spanish, which Angel could be associated with. Are there any flaws in this reasoning?

Have to finish up some school work before I can work on RP.

Ugh. I want to write!!!

Note: WOO-HOO!!! "It's the Great Pumpkin, Charlie Brown" is going to be on at 8 tonight!!!

i dont see anything wrong with it

what would all the districts be then?

chinatown?chinadome? dublindome?

i better stop before someone gets offended

Names in spanish mhhhh....

Nicolas
Alejandro (I like this name)
Eduardo
Santos (Means saints)
Luis
Francisco
Marío
Ignacio (Nicknamed Nacho )
Salvador (Meaning savior, can be both last and first name)
Leandro (Nicknamed Leo)
Marcos (Can be Marco, I have a cousin named Markos though )


Last Names

Perez (My last name ^__^
Lopez
Cruz (Means Cross)
Cortez
Calderon
Torres (Towers)
De la Luna (Of the Moon)
Vegas (Not the city)
Vazquez
Guerrero (Warrior)
Ferraz
Lucas (Its Greek or Latin, but used a lot in Mexico)


Mhhh I dunno, what would you look in for a name?