Rate the location

Fujiko 01-27-2005 09:18 PM
Of course! you're with "daddy"! 7/10
Dork 01-27-2005 11:41 PM
"In my helicopter (near the beach), counting my money"

Fits in with your theme. 8/10, the parenthesizes are a little weird, breaks up the flow and strickly on a visual level makes the quote look a little unbalanced. And I'm also not sure if the comma is suppose to be there, I could be wrong though. Maybe if you had it as 'Near the beach, in my helicopter, counting my money'. The commas here are correct because now 'in my helicopter' is a clause.

Sorry for going off like that. I just realized I probably need to doing some reading on punctuation. I really do like your location, feels fun and reminds me of summer.

The Fallen Pheonix, I have to rate yours. 10/10 Everything about your theme puts me in the mood to defy gravity Big Grin


muchlove
-dork
Avenir 01-28-2005 12:19 AM
Dork - 10 out of 10

No noticable quirks on the quote. Quite an original location for the current situation in your area. But indeed, my friend, very much indeed. Good luck to you on such a hectic event. Smile
Mr. Fortnight 01-28-2005 04:08 PM
Avenir

Your location does not rely on gimmicks to impress, and is quite descriptive...

So...

9/10.
Avenir 01-28-2005 04:17 PM
Ensign Minneapolis - 10 out of 10

It matches the mood of your profile without flaw and is quite a catchy phrase. Smile
Almasy 01-30-2005 03:09 PM
Avenir: "The Verge of Fantasy"

Perfect! Your Location is just the kind of Location I'm talking about in my response to Ensign Minneapolis!

10/10



Ensign Minneapolis: "Floating in a sea of books..."

Hmm. Well, I'm not much of a fan of Locations that are either sentances or little phrases with only the first letter capitalized (same goes for User Titles).

For example, if, instead, your Location was "The Sea of Books" (or something like that) then I would give you 10/10, because in that instance it's in a nice, neat package, if you see what I mean.

So, since your current Location reads the way it does, I'm going to have to give you a
7.5 - 8 / 10
Mr. Fortnight 01-31-2005 04:47 PM
Good point.

Advice taken and implimented. ^_^
Darkside 01-31-2005 04:55 PM
10/10 fits your navy/water gimmick very nicely.
Sara Comatori 01-31-2005 05:05 PM
I love yours 10/10.
Avenir 02-04-2005 05:08 AM
Ally Rosewater - 6 out of 10

I like it, it's quite catchy. However, there are a few problems; most notably the two spelling errors of "won" instead of "one" and "megadus" instead of "megadeus." I also feel the periods halfway through the statement are unnecessary. But other than that, I like it. Smile
Christina Perry 03-11-2005 08:37 AM
Avenir: "The Orbital Ring," I like that location.

Rate: 10/10
Tickle Tickle 03-11-2005 10:40 AM
It seems to suit you, but what person has the name 'Akuma'? In'st that Japanese for devil? 8/10
Generalissimo D 03-11-2005 02:01 PM
Umino:Yours just registerd on me after I watched Chicken run. "Damn yankees! Overpaid, oversexed, and over here!"
8/10 for slight originality.
Tickle Tickle 03-11-2005 02:16 PM
quote:
Originally posted by BigOZ
Umino:Yours just registerd on me after I watched Chicken run. "Damn yankees! Overpaid, oversexed, and over here!"
8/10 for slight originality.


Um..what? My location comes from the Pokemon Theme..

*sigh*

As for yours, pretty good I guess, but a little too long. 9/10
Avenir 03-19-2005 12:16 AM
I believe I have rated Umino's location in the past. Therefore, I shall rate BigOZ's instead. Smile

BigOZ - 9 out of 10

It seems to suit your personality based on what I've observed in IRC with you. Though, it is slightly long with the "Or haunting the Nightingale" suffix. Overall, it's pretty neat. Smile

My new location was chosen to match the A.I. - Artificial Intelligence theme I am currently using in my profile.
Generalissimo D 03-19-2005 03:26 PM
Are you in Man-Hattan Avenir? well suits your theme very well, its short, simple, and to the point. 8.2/10
angelcakes 03-19-2005 10:58 PM
BigOZ- 6/10...all I can say is huh? Maybe I'm just being slow, but I don't get it Confused
Avenir 03-19-2005 11:12 PM
Angelcakes - 8 out of 10

I'm very fond of your location; it's a very catchy phrase. However, although I like it very much, I feel everything past the first line is a bit redundant, requring one to stop and glance at it for a time. Very delightful phrase, though. Smile
Almasy 03-21-2005 03:38 PM
Avenir: "Mecha Restricted Area"

Very cool! It seems to fit your current signature/avatar theme! ^_^

10/10
Generalissimo D 03-28-2005 08:41 PM
Almasy: "Paradiso Perduto"

Is that some sort of porteguese? because I translate it to "dog(like/ish/ful) paradise". Nevertheless, original. I felt this went better with your old paris sig with that chihuahua.

9/10.