| evanASF27 | 01-27-2004 07:13 PM |
Hey ya'll I'm kinda lazy tonight to do any elaborate introduction to my fanfic here so I'll just post it directly
Inform me of any mistakes along the way ok? Cos I'm still kinda new at this Fanfic thing
Big O steps forward out of the dust and debris and marches menacingly towards the mysterious megadeus. “The dark shadows of the night can play tricks on your eyes, but I swear it looks as if that megadeus is even taller than Big O,” Roger thinks to himself.
*Roger Smith voice-over*
“I bet you are wondering what brought me and Big O back onto the streets already. Having already fought another one of Beck’s failed attempts of creating a megadeus, I thought that was going to be the last time I had to deal with a criminal obsessed with megadeuses…however I suppose I was wrong.”
Big O lifts its arms up and then fires its Chromebuster into the dark shadows obscuring the hiding megadeus. The bright light casts a silhouette of the enemy into the smoke and dust filled air. The megadeus appears to be very tall yet thin like a skinny man, there appear to be huge pistons on its arms like Big O’s, but the shape around the chest is unclear. It seemed as if the megadeus was wearing a coat! ‘You’re nothing more than a coward hiding in the shadows,’ Roger shouts. ‘I wouldn’t judge a book by its cover now Roger Smith,’ calls a voice from within the megadeus, ‘I have evaded the cops countless times and I even get out of the tightest situations with a souvenir!’
“At least that’s what I thought.”
The scene blacks out and all that is heard is an annoying laugh. The laugh ends with the sound of a megadeus powering up and then…silence.
“It started the day after I had defeated Beck and his giant robot…”
A view of the highway coming from Electric City comes into focus and a red, old style convertible appears on the road. The car looks like an old classic car straight from the racing track, four people ride comfortably in it talking.
The driver relaxes in his seat and smiles, “Ah there’s nothing like the smell of flowers and the sight of endless fields to get you in the mood for…huh?”
“The mood for what, Lupin? If the word you’re thinking of is LOVE then you’re out of luck,” the woman next to him replies.
“Oh go easy on him Fujiko,” said the bearded man sitting behind the driver, “He’s just-”
“No that isn’t it Jigen,” Lupin said, he appeared to be staring at a sign coming up ahead.
“Oh what is it then?” asked Jigen in an annoyed tone.
“Look,” said the robed man as he pointed with his sword’s sheath at the sign in front of them.
“‘WELCOME TO PARADIGM CITY’, hmm…sounds like a quaint little town,” said Lupin with a grin as he drove past the sign. “I wonder where they got the name for that city…”
“Uh Lupin?”
“I mean they had to have-”
“Lupin!”
“WHAT JIGEN!?!”
“I think I see your ‘quaint little town’ up ahead.”
“Really? Where…What the!?”
There, rising above the horizon was the city and its enormous domes.
“What the friggin hell?!”
“What are they!?” Fujiko gasped.
“They appear to be domes but it’s impossible. Not even the richest king or emperor in the world has money like that,” said Goemon in his matter-of-fact voice.
They looked shocked and astonished at the sight of the Dome covered city. Jigen leaned forward and asked Lupin quietly, “Hey Lupin, ever seen anything like those things before?”
“Actually now that I think of it, I saw a city like that in a comic strip once but there’s no way that’s the city from the cartoon.”
“I see…” sighed Jigen, “Then I guess we have no other choice but to keep going. Things sure can’t get any weirder than they already are.”
They drove onward while a few miles behind them a man in a brown trench coat, riding a bicycle with two flat tires and rusted up parts, struggled to keep following them.
“Damn you Lupin,” he muttered, “Why’d you have to escape using the longest most deserted road you could find.” He hits a rock and the remaining rubber comes off the tires, the man falls face first on the ground. “CRAP CRAP CRAP!!...GRR! LUPIN!!!”
********
The scene changes to the Military Police headquarters outside the domes. A battered and bent up bike leans against a dumpster outside and the man walks into the building battered, bruised, and really messed up. He walks down the hallway and a few officers who are sorting files look up at him.
“What are you staring at,” the dusty man glares. The officers hastily go back to sorting files and the man begins to walk down the hallway again…the officers look at each other and shake their heads.
“Ah good afternoon Inspector,” Dastun said in a semi kind voice, he looks up. “Uhh…are you ok?”
“Oh yah. I’m fine…the ride was a bit longer than I had anticipated. Now then Colonel let me get down to business, but first things first. The name’s Zenigata.” He shakes hands with the colonel and then sits down in a chair.
“I would expect it was a long ride from Electric City, but not too many people travel the road by bicycle mind you,” the colonel sighed. “Now then, what is it that you came here for Inspector?”
”Oh yah. I wanted to inform you that the world’s greatest thief has just entered your happy little city-”
“Beck?! No! That can’t be, he hasn’t been locked up for more than twenty-four hours yet!”
“Take it easy Colonel. I don’t know who this 'Beck' fella is you’re talking about but I doesn’t really matter. What matters is catching the guy I was following, Lupin the Third.”
“Lupin…the Third? Never heard of the guy,” Dastun replied as he got up to get a cup of coffee.
“Now listen here Colonel! Lupin is the world’s greatest thief and he’s come into your city! He’s here to steal the most valuable things you got and you’re just going to stand around here doing nothing!!?”
Dastun slams his mug on his desk. “Inspector. You aren’t the person who gives the orders around here.”
“But Sir...you don’t know Lupin! He’s evil I tell ya. You can’t just let him get away with what he’s planning!”
Calmly Dastun puts on his hat and turns around to face Inspector Zenigata. “And what is it, Inspector that he’s planning to steal?”
“Uhh…Well you see…”
“Yes...” Dastun growls.
“I haven’t exactly figured that out yet, Sir. But believe me I’m going to find his sorry behind and bring him back here in chains!”
“GET OUT! Inspector, just get OUT!”
“Hey! Wait a second! You don’t underst-” Dastun grabs Zenigata and throws him out his office door smashing him into a wall…Zenigata’s brown hat lands gracefully on his butt. *ow*
“Inspector, I’ll get you a ride to a hotel where you can stay temporarily. Men, get this man out of my sight!”
A group of officers grab Zenigata and twisting and struggling they bring him outside and push him towards an awaiting taxi. Zenigata is pushed inside and the door is slammed shut. The driver nods and then drives away. The taxi slows down and stops at a red light in front of a department store, people crowd around the display windows looking at merchandise.
“Damn it all,” he sighs. “Now then where would I be if I was Lupin…DRIVER! To the nearest bar! I’ll bet Lupin is there. The man can’t live without his--”
“--WINE! BEER! Drinks! Oh yah, jackpot! Come on guys!” Lupin smiles. They walk inside, all except for Goemon.
“Oh come on Goemon.”
“No.”
“I’m sure they’d have some Sake in stock or something just come on!” Lupin grabs Goemon’s shoulder and drags him quickly inside.
The full view of the bar can be seen. Its name written in fancy letting on the door: “THE SPEAKEASY”. The gang sits down at the bar table and talk a little about what they had to do to get away from old Pops on the last caper. Outside a taxi stops and a man gets out.
“Thank you. Now then...where’s Lupin.”
It’s Zenigata. He looks up the street, down the street and across the street. Finally he looks behind him. “OH!” He smiles broadly hiding his embarrassment and looks in the window of the Speakeasy.
“Hmm” sighs Lupin, “This wine isn’t the best I’ve ever had, but I suppose it’ll have to do.” He groans and finishes his glass. He looks up at the bar and then turns quickly. “OH CRAP!”
“What is it Lupin? Damn it how the hell did he get here?!” Jigen groaned.
“AH HAA!! I GOT YOU SURROUNDED LUPIN!!!” Zenigata bursts through the door and grabs his handcuffs.
“Oh come on…we can’t get rid of you for a second Pops.”
“GRRR!! Well Lupin I’d like to see YOU get out of here! I’m blocking your only exit! HAHAHA!”
Lupin nods to Jigen. Jigen grabs his revolver and shoots the fan above the door. The fan crashes down on top of Zenigata and breaks into pieces.
“Ok now’s our chance.” Lupin jumps through the door followed by Fujiko and Goemon, Jigen jumps through a window.
Dale walks around the bar and stands in front of the unconscious Zenigata. He looks at the windows and the fan and then picks up Zenigata…instantly he comes to.
“Huh what the…...hey what are you…HEY…WOOOOAAAHH!!!!!”
Dale throws Zenigata out into the street where he lands on a car stopped at the light. The car is jet black and with very ornate chrome details. It was the Griffon, and Zenigata crashed through the roof of the car and landed in the back seat!
“What the hell…Who in the hell are y-… uhh Sir are you alright?”
((continued in part 2))
Inform me of any mistakes along the way ok? Cos I'm still kinda new at this Fanfic thing
The Greatest Thief (Act 18 1/3)
(Rated PG-14L …beware of foul language contained in the story)
Introduction
(Rated PG-14L …beware of foul language contained in the story)
Introduction
Big O steps forward out of the dust and debris and marches menacingly towards the mysterious megadeus. “The dark shadows of the night can play tricks on your eyes, but I swear it looks as if that megadeus is even taller than Big O,” Roger thinks to himself.
*Roger Smith voice-over*
“I bet you are wondering what brought me and Big O back onto the streets already. Having already fought another one of Beck’s failed attempts of creating a megadeus, I thought that was going to be the last time I had to deal with a criminal obsessed with megadeuses…however I suppose I was wrong.”
Big O lifts its arms up and then fires its Chromebuster into the dark shadows obscuring the hiding megadeus. The bright light casts a silhouette of the enemy into the smoke and dust filled air. The megadeus appears to be very tall yet thin like a skinny man, there appear to be huge pistons on its arms like Big O’s, but the shape around the chest is unclear. It seemed as if the megadeus was wearing a coat! ‘You’re nothing more than a coward hiding in the shadows,’ Roger shouts. ‘I wouldn’t judge a book by its cover now Roger Smith,’ calls a voice from within the megadeus, ‘I have evaded the cops countless times and I even get out of the tightest situations with a souvenir!’
“At least that’s what I thought.”
The scene blacks out and all that is heard is an annoying laugh. The laugh ends with the sound of a megadeus powering up and then…silence.
“It started the day after I had defeated Beck and his giant robot…”
Scene 1
A view of the highway coming from Electric City comes into focus and a red, old style convertible appears on the road. The car looks like an old classic car straight from the racing track, four people ride comfortably in it talking.
The driver relaxes in his seat and smiles, “Ah there’s nothing like the smell of flowers and the sight of endless fields to get you in the mood for…huh?”
“The mood for what, Lupin? If the word you’re thinking of is LOVE then you’re out of luck,” the woman next to him replies.
“Oh go easy on him Fujiko,” said the bearded man sitting behind the driver, “He’s just-”
“No that isn’t it Jigen,” Lupin said, he appeared to be staring at a sign coming up ahead.
“Oh what is it then?” asked Jigen in an annoyed tone.
“Look,” said the robed man as he pointed with his sword’s sheath at the sign in front of them.
“‘WELCOME TO PARADIGM CITY’, hmm…sounds like a quaint little town,” said Lupin with a grin as he drove past the sign. “I wonder where they got the name for that city…”
“Uh Lupin?”
“I mean they had to have-”
“Lupin!”
“WHAT JIGEN!?!”
“I think I see your ‘quaint little town’ up ahead.”
“Really? Where…What the!?”
There, rising above the horizon was the city and its enormous domes.
“What the friggin hell?!”
“What are they!?” Fujiko gasped.
“They appear to be domes but it’s impossible. Not even the richest king or emperor in the world has money like that,” said Goemon in his matter-of-fact voice.
They looked shocked and astonished at the sight of the Dome covered city. Jigen leaned forward and asked Lupin quietly, “Hey Lupin, ever seen anything like those things before?”
“Actually now that I think of it, I saw a city like that in a comic strip once but there’s no way that’s the city from the cartoon.”
“I see…” sighed Jigen, “Then I guess we have no other choice but to keep going. Things sure can’t get any weirder than they already are.”
They drove onward while a few miles behind them a man in a brown trench coat, riding a bicycle with two flat tires and rusted up parts, struggled to keep following them.
“Damn you Lupin,” he muttered, “Why’d you have to escape using the longest most deserted road you could find.” He hits a rock and the remaining rubber comes off the tires, the man falls face first on the ground. “CRAP CRAP CRAP!!...GRR! LUPIN!!!”
********
The scene changes to the Military Police headquarters outside the domes. A battered and bent up bike leans against a dumpster outside and the man walks into the building battered, bruised, and really messed up. He walks down the hallway and a few officers who are sorting files look up at him.
“What are you staring at,” the dusty man glares. The officers hastily go back to sorting files and the man begins to walk down the hallway again…the officers look at each other and shake their heads.
“Ah good afternoon Inspector,” Dastun said in a semi kind voice, he looks up. “Uhh…are you ok?”
“Oh yah. I’m fine…the ride was a bit longer than I had anticipated. Now then Colonel let me get down to business, but first things first. The name’s Zenigata.” He shakes hands with the colonel and then sits down in a chair.
“I would expect it was a long ride from Electric City, but not too many people travel the road by bicycle mind you,” the colonel sighed. “Now then, what is it that you came here for Inspector?”
”Oh yah. I wanted to inform you that the world’s greatest thief has just entered your happy little city-”
“Beck?! No! That can’t be, he hasn’t been locked up for more than twenty-four hours yet!”
“Take it easy Colonel. I don’t know who this 'Beck' fella is you’re talking about but I doesn’t really matter. What matters is catching the guy I was following, Lupin the Third.”
“Lupin…the Third? Never heard of the guy,” Dastun replied as he got up to get a cup of coffee.
“Now listen here Colonel! Lupin is the world’s greatest thief and he’s come into your city! He’s here to steal the most valuable things you got and you’re just going to stand around here doing nothing!!?”
Dastun slams his mug on his desk. “Inspector. You aren’t the person who gives the orders around here.”
“But Sir...you don’t know Lupin! He’s evil I tell ya. You can’t just let him get away with what he’s planning!”
Calmly Dastun puts on his hat and turns around to face Inspector Zenigata. “And what is it, Inspector that he’s planning to steal?”
“Uhh…Well you see…”
“Yes...” Dastun growls.
“I haven’t exactly figured that out yet, Sir. But believe me I’m going to find his sorry behind and bring him back here in chains!”
“GET OUT! Inspector, just get OUT!”
“Hey! Wait a second! You don’t underst-” Dastun grabs Zenigata and throws him out his office door smashing him into a wall…Zenigata’s brown hat lands gracefully on his butt. *ow*
“Inspector, I’ll get you a ride to a hotel where you can stay temporarily. Men, get this man out of my sight!”
A group of officers grab Zenigata and twisting and struggling they bring him outside and push him towards an awaiting taxi. Zenigata is pushed inside and the door is slammed shut. The driver nods and then drives away. The taxi slows down and stops at a red light in front of a department store, people crowd around the display windows looking at merchandise.
“Damn it all,” he sighs. “Now then where would I be if I was Lupin…DRIVER! To the nearest bar! I’ll bet Lupin is there. The man can’t live without his--”
“--WINE! BEER! Drinks! Oh yah, jackpot! Come on guys!” Lupin smiles. They walk inside, all except for Goemon.
“Oh come on Goemon.”
“No.”
“I’m sure they’d have some Sake in stock or something just come on!” Lupin grabs Goemon’s shoulder and drags him quickly inside.
The full view of the bar can be seen. Its name written in fancy letting on the door: “THE SPEAKEASY”. The gang sits down at the bar table and talk a little about what they had to do to get away from old Pops on the last caper. Outside a taxi stops and a man gets out.
“Thank you. Now then...where’s Lupin.”
It’s Zenigata. He looks up the street, down the street and across the street. Finally he looks behind him. “OH!” He smiles broadly hiding his embarrassment and looks in the window of the Speakeasy.
“Hmm” sighs Lupin, “This wine isn’t the best I’ve ever had, but I suppose it’ll have to do.” He groans and finishes his glass. He looks up at the bar and then turns quickly. “OH CRAP!”
“What is it Lupin? Damn it how the hell did he get here?!” Jigen groaned.
“AH HAA!! I GOT YOU SURROUNDED LUPIN!!!” Zenigata bursts through the door and grabs his handcuffs.
“Oh come on…we can’t get rid of you for a second Pops.”
“GRRR!! Well Lupin I’d like to see YOU get out of here! I’m blocking your only exit! HAHAHA!”
Lupin nods to Jigen. Jigen grabs his revolver and shoots the fan above the door. The fan crashes down on top of Zenigata and breaks into pieces.
“Ok now’s our chance.” Lupin jumps through the door followed by Fujiko and Goemon, Jigen jumps through a window.
Dale walks around the bar and stands in front of the unconscious Zenigata. He looks at the windows and the fan and then picks up Zenigata…instantly he comes to.
“Huh what the…...hey what are you…HEY…WOOOOAAAHH!!!!!”
Dale throws Zenigata out into the street where he lands on a car stopped at the light. The car is jet black and with very ornate chrome details. It was the Griffon, and Zenigata crashed through the roof of the car and landed in the back seat!
“What the hell…Who in the hell are y-… uhh Sir are you alright?”
((continued in part 2))
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